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amazing

amazing and brilliant; full of light and imagery. Thanks for sharing.

posted by 4thechildren on January 11, 2009 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

This is soo expressive, Sam, well-done! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on January 9, 2009 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

Your obviously very intelligent and talented

posted by serene09 on January 9, 2009 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

Brilliantly described, especially the quagmire and this image of slowly mentally siinking into it.

Well done.

posted by Tiddlypush on January 9, 2009 at 12:58 PM | link to this | reply

I like this form and I hate it when minds dont have a delete button

posted by lustorlove on January 9, 2009 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

Simply beautiful

I love it. Your mind cannot steal your moment unless you allow it to.

posted by zuraffo on January 9, 2009 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Sam

“I put them in a place of rest”…. If only we could take our troubles, our fears, our disappointments and do that more often than we do.  Those “moments” are so precious.

posted by Troosha on January 9, 2009 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful poem

right now I sympathise absolutely

posted by lionreign on January 9, 2009 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

|Amazing piece Shelly

your inventions are just awesome; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on January 9, 2009 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

Wow!

 You always write such great poetry.

posted by Kolekshuns on January 9, 2009 at 12:37 AM | link to this | reply

Woeful words!

that pull at my heartstrings and total being so.seems we can not bury some memories deep enough.brilliant as always.thank you for the read. have a pretty week-end!

posted by rubypoem on January 9, 2009 at 12:31 AM | link to this | reply

The word count for your Tosh Form reminds me of instructions and counting stitches for knitting or crocheting some fantastic sweater or six-needle argyle socks.  Makes my head spin.

posted by TAPS. on January 8, 2009 at 11:42 PM | link to this | reply

A conundrum eloquently described. Only a genius can do this.

posted by hardilaziz on January 8, 2009 at 10:24 PM | link to this | reply

Not facing it is more hell than doing so!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 8, 2009 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes... a "Moment like that can seem like a life time, and you nailed it. Kind of sad though....if it's painful.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 8, 2009 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

A pensive poem in a complcated form. Haunting of the mind is aa annoying dream pattern >Well done Shelly/sam

posted by merkie on January 8, 2009 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

 for another day love BCAThe New Bill*s Cave

posted by BC-A on January 8, 2009 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Shelly... so poignant and sincere... sometimes things we have put to rest are just hidding inside and need to come out so we can get rid of them... You have had your share  of crosses to bear my sweet Sammy... G-d should give you peace and happiness.  Beautifully expressed !  All my love  xoxo 

posted by Sinome on January 8, 2009 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

shelly

This is one of those poems that describes a buried thought in my own mind, so it almost feels like deja vu to read it.  Great new form, I have a couple others to try first, though!! (of yours)

posted by calia14 on January 8, 2009 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

One of those poems that deserve dwelling on...

posted by Nautikos on January 8, 2009 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

Love it.....very touching and wonderful

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 8, 2009 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Shelly!

I just posted a poem I wrote.

I modeled it after my favorite book, Twilight! Hope you enjoy it!

Love ANROHA25 

posted by ANROHA25 on January 8, 2009 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply