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My dear princess

The depth of feelings with which you write tells a lot about you, the felicity of words, no doubt, springs from the core into words that flow effortlessly and grips the readers .. whether it be melancholy, or happiness, or the sympathetic painting of nature or even the pathosn you poems. Sinome, did you know these are marnelous works?!!! from my cold sands to your warm ocean kissed ones xoxoxo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on January 7, 2009 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

I feel sad now.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 7, 2009 at 6:50 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Excellent and I can remember staring out at the rain through many a train window, feeling melancholy, and your words awaken so much of my own past. You are a magical and I love your writing.

posted by WileyJohn on January 7, 2009 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, very moving and real..I've been on that train....

"Like smoke in the wind her life has passed
and now she is nothing but a dusty road
where a stranger footprints remain, like a shrine to the past."

"Like smoke in the wind her life has passed" - how true of us all, Sinome, all too soon we realize life has been what's been going on while we were busy with other things...I feel not only for her, but for this couple...... 

posted by Rumor on January 7, 2009 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply

You share brilliant gems of who you are with your poetry Thank you you are

a wonderful soul.

posted by Kabu on January 7, 2009 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful post...xxxooo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 7, 2009 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

Very melancholic but convincingly done.

posted by hardilaziz on January 7, 2009 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

An excellent post my dear Sinome

the imagery is most clear albeit painting a very melancholy picture; superb write; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 7, 2009 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

The pathos & pain in some of the lines is so heartfelt & real........excellent.

posted by shamasehar on January 7, 2009 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

I had a crazy math professor once.  He made me want to cry.
I like the way you used that as a base
for writing about 'her'.

posted by TAPS. on January 6, 2009 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply

Such profound work

Even though they paint a melancholy picture, I can't help but be amazed at the beauty of your words  

posted by calia14 on January 6, 2009 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

I just love reading your work....Awesome!!!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 6, 2009 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply