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My dear princess
The depth of feelings with which you write tells a lot about you, the felicity of words, no doubt, springs from the core into words that flow effortlessly and grips the readers .. whether it be melancholy, or happiness, or the sympathetic painting of nature or even the pathosn you poems. Sinome, did you know these are marnelous works?!!!
from my cold sands to your warm ocean kissed ones xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on January 7, 2009 at 8:56 PM
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I feel sad now.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 7, 2009 at 6:50 PM
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Sinome
Excellent and I can remember staring out at the rain through many a train window, feeling melancholy, and your words awaken so much of my own past. You are a magical and I love your writing.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 7, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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Sinome, very moving and real..I've been on that train....
"Like smoke in the wind her life has passed
and now she is nothing but a dusty road
where a stranger footprints remain, like a shrine to the past."
"Like smoke in the wind her life has passed" - how true of us all, Sinome, all too soon we realize life has been what's been going on while we were busy with other things...I feel not only for her, but for this couple......
posted by
Rumor
on January 7, 2009 at 5:40 PM
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You share brilliant gems of who you are with your poetry Thank you you are
a wonderful soul.
posted by
Kabu
on January 7, 2009 at 12:07 PM
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Beautiful post...xxxooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 7, 2009 at 7:55 AM
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Very melancholic but convincingly done.
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 7, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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An excellent post my dear Sinome
the imagery is most clear albeit painting a very melancholy picture; superb write; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on January 7, 2009 at 5:53 AM
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The pathos & pain in some of the lines is so heartfelt & real........excellent.
posted by
shamasehar
on January 7, 2009 at 5:30 AM
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I had a crazy math professor once. He made me want to cry.
I like the way you used that as a base
for writing about 'her'.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 6, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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Such profound work
Even though they paint a melancholy picture, I can't help but be amazed at the beauty of your words
posted by
calia14
on January 6, 2009 at 11:00 PM
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I just love reading your work....Awesome!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
on January 6, 2009 at 10:41 PM
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