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You use many different poetic styles. A mark of virtuosity.
-=RenSpur=-
posted by
RenSpur
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January 14, 2009
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It's always the casualties..
Who do not want the war.. but suffer the worst consequences.. 
Your short poem brings stronger force than the news I have been reading lately. Great piece, Sam! 
posted by
orcalion
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January 8, 2009
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A beautiful sentiment . . . and, Sam, for God's sake, please eat!
posted by
Soaker
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January 6, 2009
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Great spin that is projected by the aggressors. Not that they want to forever eject Palestinians from lands that belong to Arabs! Nice way of saying...It is not Israel who is killing the children with bombs and bullets. Oh No! That is too simple to be true! Hamas(the legitimate Government) is using shields!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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January 6, 2009
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MASTER PIECE for the life of humans all our the world.Seeds of hope planted
posted by
Mystereo
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January 6, 2009
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sam, I see this covering both sides of the conflict and ot just one side.
posted by
benzinha
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January 6, 2009
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Excellant Sam! Just a pity that your words probably will not be read by
those who NEED to see them MOST! Great work! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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January 6, 2009
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Fabulous
Strong and focused - love the form too
posted by
lionreign
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January 6, 2009
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Excellent!
Great poem.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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January 6, 2009
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Powerful and universal, Dear Sam!
posted by
PoetRaye
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January 6, 2009
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Wow sam! That's a very powerful message in this poem. I'm impressed, MEDEAR!
posted by
auslander
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January 6, 2009
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Now, THIS is a strong poem! Excellent. Mal
posted by
gapcohen
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January 6, 2009
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An excellent means......
to get your point across.......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
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January 6, 2009
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Excellent Thought and very well expressed
posted by
skye08
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January 5, 2009
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Excellent...you have torn wide open the truth in terror.
posted by
yellowrose55
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January 5, 2009
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Nice form. Great message.
posted by
TAPS.
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January 5, 2009
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Empty the real arms...
Ah! Sam! what bombardment... nice shooting! They empty the real arms with arms filled with the lifeless... Ah! "suffer the little children..."
posted by
Rotsen
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January 5, 2009
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very strong words
posted by
lustorlove
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January 5, 2009
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Right on Shelly. Bravo !
posted by
merkie
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January 5, 2009
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posted by
Samantha39
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January 5, 2009
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sam, I am in total agreement with you...these are cowards all, who cower
behind innocent women and children and then cry to the world for sympathy..
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posted by
Rumor
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January 5, 2009
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Shelly
Fabulous statement!
posted by
Nautikos
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January 5, 2009
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Oh! This is a masterpiece. Your message come out loud and clear and convincingly. Even the devil would shake like a fig leaf if he were to read your lines.
you
posted by
hardilaziz
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January 5, 2009
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Wonderful work, Shelly!
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_teddypoet_
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January 5, 2009
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