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I just had to stop and linger in those first 2/3 lines -- very good!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 12, 2009 at 3:21 AM | link to this | reply

This is a very rhythmical poem, describing the ebb and flow of thoguhts which want to be put into words. It seems like all the thoughts in the mind are dancing. It's quite beautiful.

 

 

posted by Tiddlypush on January 10, 2009 at 3:03 AM | link to this | reply

Most excellent, Merkie!

 A very apt illustration indeed!..

posted by PoetRaye on January 6, 2009 at 6:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Wonderful!!!

You are so welcome Thank you Lion!

posted by merkie on January 5, 2009 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lovely

Thanks Malcolm!

posted by merkie on January 5, 2009 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: OTA

Thank you so much!Words!

posted by merkie on January 5, 2009 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Communication

Thank you Maria Have a great week ! 

posted by merkie on January 5, 2009 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautiful and eloquent expression...

Thank you I am glad yuo liked it!

posted by merkie on January 5, 2009 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful!!!

This made me smile... thank you

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2009 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely

I particulaalry liked the lines: "

The word and the light in unison

prepare our path each day"

posted by malcolm on January 5, 2009 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

Some things just need to be said.  ~peace

posted by OTA. on January 5, 2009 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

Communication

the world would be a far better place if there were more of this my friend! A superb piece; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 5, 2009 at 3:49 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and eloquent expression...

...of a poets challenge. I really like this...well done!

posted by metalrat on January 4, 2009 at 10:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you Shelly/Sam .See you later !

posted by merkie on January 4, 2009 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

A bit of philosophy my poetess, the close is indicative of that! It is an excellent close as well! The entire poem is a delight to read! sam / Shelly

posted by sam444 on January 4, 2009 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: vogue.

Thank you so much! Words are as passion and are to be used or not used with thoughful caution for the reasons you comment!

posted by merkie on January 4, 2009 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: merkie

Thank you Wiley !

posted by merkie on January 4, 2009 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: perfect! your words are illuminating merkie!

Your words also shine a spotlight on growth .Thanks Mike.

posted by merkie on January 4, 2009 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

Words are so powerful. They can destroy and save lives like nothing else. So well written.

posted by vogue on January 4, 2009 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

merkie

Well paced words there luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 4, 2009 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

perfect! your words are illuminating merkie!

posted by muley12 on January 4, 2009 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: 9STAR

Hi Sue Thank you so much!Enjoy Sunday!

posted by merkie on January 4, 2009 at 1:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie :-)

I love your comment! Thanks Marion

posted by merkie on January 4, 2009 at 1:09 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on January 4, 2009 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie :-)

words do seem to bridge that gap don't they....and as writers we must make sure that it is our job to keep it simple enough to remember but at the same time wise enough to make us think. Love this one...

posted by Wigopa_ on January 4, 2009 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply