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Outstanding! Grand Slam! Bring home humans souls for light and strenght!

posted by Mystereo on January 11, 2009 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Awe Fred this is a warm embrace on the day to read your sincere healing words. We forget the Angels and keep struggleing so 'tis a good reminder that we are well cared for!!

posted by merkie on January 3, 2009 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

PS: still thinking about this. I've found for myself that when I mention trascendence, a lot of people wonder what I'm talking about. I think your poem brings the reader thru that kind of experience--even if they don't have a word for it, and in this sense--the length of the poem and the number of stanzas works quite well. Now that I've thoroughly confused myself in articulation...do you think you can read between the lines, here?

posted by jfm32 on January 3, 2009 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

:The light transcending: what a wonderful thought. Especially liked 3rd stanza, which seemed to make clear the intermingling of feelings to things, and seems to me to be the swivel (center) point of the piece. But since I have a penchant for compactness (...and hey, this is only me)thought rest of poem became a little long, a bit meandering, to reach the angel. While I understand that the experience is the time it takes (and well conveyed)--Is transcendence the thought or the flash of insight? The poem is well written and certainly carries the reader. So, disregard what I just said. It was just a thought-flash I got in the read. To have experiernced inner content thru its outer form was quite a treat.

posted by jfm32 on January 3, 2009 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on January 3, 2009 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply