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- Go to Perplexed ~~~~~~[The Robert Burns Stanza; Sextain] ~~~~~~~~~
The intense feeling and depth in this poem is reaching and has arrived. Sad...yes, but there is happiness at the at the end. Excellent.
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yellowrose55
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January 8, 2009
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Awsome write so deep it took me away yet, I had to stand. Great piece.
posted by
Mystereo
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January 6, 2009
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you can run, but you can't hide
The poem reminds of struggle with addiction. It's very deep with many layers. Thanks for sharing. Loved learning about the sextain.
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4thechildren
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January 4, 2009
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Fantastic!
Original, deep, masterful!
posted by
LadyGhost1970
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January 3, 2009
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Wow!
So touching!
posted by
Kolekshuns
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January 3, 2009
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Stunning perfection!
posted by
PoetRaye
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January 2, 2009
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I am learning new poetry forms from your posts. This format is very interesting. Can easily relate to the emotions expressed by you as I have felt the same.
posted by
hardilaziz
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January 2, 2009
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Excellent find!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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January 2, 2009
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The mountains may be the only physical salvation to be had! If you read my post on Mitar Tarabich and if you read about biblical Armageddon......run for the hills/mountains. But, which ones? Very deep piece!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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January 2, 2009
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Always, you provide great examples of what you are teaching.
posted by
TAPS.
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January 2, 2009
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Shelly
What can I say but repeat what I have said before - that I admire your creative energy, that constantly produces thought-provoking poetry...
posted by
Nautikos
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January 2, 2009
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posted by
9STAR
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January 2, 2009
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Brilliant!
"...my very fiber has come apart at the heart of it's seams."
You never cease to floor me with your words, Shelly.
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metalrat
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January 2, 2009
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Happy New Year, Sam…
I admire your wealth of knowledge of different poetry styles and your eagerness to tackle them. You do it very well; taking your own emotions and crafting them accordingly.
posted by
Troosha
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January 2, 2009
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I know you are going through changes, I hope they work for the better
posted by
muley12
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January 2, 2009
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Excellent Sam .Hold yourself together Please! lol
posted by
merkie
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January 2, 2009
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Great work, Sam! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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January 2, 2009
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I PURSUE A FINAL STAND, I LIKE THIS LINE, GREAT POEM , THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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January 2, 2009
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Have you some Scottish blood in you MEDEAR?
posted by
auslander
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January 2, 2009
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Beautifully and elegantly written
Although I hope your melancholy outlook finds genuine reprieve...
posted by
lionreign
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January 2, 2009
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Shelly, what can I say!!!!!!!!!
I am finding it more and more difficult to define my thoughts on your posts my dear friend!! Another stupendous write; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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January 2, 2009
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sam ~.~
A superb piece, as always. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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January 2, 2009
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Happy New Year sam! Another great poem, this one is deep!
posted by
calia14
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January 1, 2009
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Sammy!!! Happy New Year my friend! This was an amazing poem... you ARE on a roll :-) All the best Sammy, now and always... I have been so busy but I will E-mail soon. Take care of you xoxo
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Sinome
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January 1, 2009
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Happy New Year,
Sam!! You are the tops!!
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KaBooM62
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January 1, 2009
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January 1, 2009
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