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open your heart for God live in his light.
posted by
Mystereo
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January 4, 2009
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Happy New Year, Wigopa…
Sorry I missed the challenge – looks like some people had fun with it. Thank you for being a devoted reader and for always making a positive contribution to this site.
posted by
Troosha
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January 2, 2009
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Marion, I missed the original challenge...
...but would like to offer the following (Haiku style)...
Stepping toward the light
on a golden thread of hope
"Freedom's Light" is such a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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January 2, 2009
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Wigopa
You had some lovely responsive poetry there kiddo.
posted by
WileyJohn
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January 1, 2009
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Re: Merkie
You are most welcome...Though I wonder how to add music...
posted by
Wigopa_
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January 1, 2009
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Wow Marion Thanks for posting them . Awesome poems in response Such fun!
I had to add the music too but where in the fragrance but in the words themselves!
posted by
merkie
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January 1, 2009
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Never before shine bright
forward became key
draw to its essence
posted by
Mystereo
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January 1, 2009
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Lovely and dream like work!
My haiku-ish offering..:)
Light through leaf veins hold
mist of yearning hues open
Her vision flows free
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 30, 2008
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I think she needed to go to the bathroom! Happy New Year my friend!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 30, 2008
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Away she goes..Where, who knows :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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December 30, 2008
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DARK CLOUDS OPEN UP
TODAY I MUST FLY ON HIGH
TO BETTER SEE TRUTH
THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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December 30, 2008
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A beauty indeed my friend
needs a little thought; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
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December 30, 2008
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S
he dreamed she lived in a cage
with golden bars all around
and someone had left opened the door
so that her spirit could fly
so she had ran out and started walking
on a rope made of fine gold
tittering above an abysm
freezing and very scared to fall...
when all of a sudden
above her , clouds made of crystal
blocked out all the cold
and a strange warmth enveloped all
like a sweet embrace
of cinnamon and vanilla
that she could mysteriously taste.
The sun that shined low in the distance
was disappearing very fast,
somehow she knew that with that sun would go her time,
so she ran towards the glow that sun was leaving behind
and in her rush she did not notice
in her golden cage she had left her heart.
She looked ahead at the wonderful glow
and back at her cage so sad, so dark
and she wondered... if I am in the light,
can I live without my heart?
posted by
Sinome
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December 29, 2008
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Awesome...I love these...Great job guys!
Thank you so much!
posted by
Wigopa_
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December 29, 2008
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Re: merkie
OH! Nice one.
posted by
calia14
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December 29, 2008
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Yeah wigopa's back!
Nice, I like your poem and I like the challenge. Here goes:
Leaving cage behind,
She ventures into the light
Freedom meets her eyes
posted by
calia14
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December 29, 2008
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Uncaged
Prison cannot hold/ imagination in chains/ flying toward home.
posted by
merkie
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December 29, 2008
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