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Is postponing until the last minute (yet, you get it done) procrastination? I thought so!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 30, 2008
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Powerful and perfect, Sam!
I so enjoy your rich but 'just right' language and the deep, reaching meaning of the verse complete....
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 30, 2008
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Beautiful poem
rich in meaning - very well written!
posted by
lionreign
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December 30, 2008
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Not quite sure about that sandman thing Shelly
somehow it makes me skin crawl to think of it; must be shadows of some film or other! As a piece this is exquisite my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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December 30, 2008
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When I was a child, mother always sang us a beautiful little Sandman song and it always made me drift off to pleasant dreams.
posted by
TAPS.
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December 30, 2008
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Sis
Is he the same sandman you're talking about? And wonder of all wonder, he even brought beautiful dreams for Sinome! Then I must know who he is
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ya all
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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December 29, 2008
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Great poem Sammy... All of us who have had issues with that Sandman know what you are talking about. I can't complain because He is brought me some beautiful dreams but is his absence I suffer more for... Your poem is an excellent illustration. Bravo
posted by
Sinome
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December 29, 2008
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deep dark and mysterious use of the words Sam. I again had to really think what you meant before I wrote a comment. I think I may rest on the noon day tide.Maybe a siesta
LOl
posted by
merkie
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December 29, 2008
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so true
posted by
Samantha39
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December 29, 2008
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