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Hearts are made to be broken, live slowly take you time no one perfect.
When I'm down here I'm touch, its easy for me to say, don't hate for so many in the sea. Smokey said" my mama told me I better shop around, live for moments. The frist is the roughest. Yet they all count to the broken pieces.

posted by Mystereo on December 29, 2008 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

Strong emotions
Nice write, I feel your pain.

posted by calia14 on December 29, 2008 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply