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I liked the way these Haikus flowed into one.  Happy Holidays

posted by Smittenheimer on December 29, 2008 at 1:09 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent Haiks! I loved them both! sam/ Shelly

posted by sam444 on December 29, 2008 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie

Loved "Caffeine"....

posted by Troosha on December 29, 2008 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Two good pieces

but I particularly loved the second one, for me it was incredibly vivid and it provoked a long moment's ponder

posted by lionreign on December 29, 2008 at 6:02 AM | link to this | reply

Great duo my friend!

many blessings and thanks for sharing

posted by mariaki on December 29, 2008 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie

Well done luv, I like the thoughts it generates.

posted by WileyJohn on December 28, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem carrying a powerful punch, nice!

posted by Mystereo on December 28, 2008 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

cool

posted by 9STAR on December 28, 2008 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

~as always .. so well done.. ~Peace

posted by OTA. on December 28, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning...excellent!

posted by _teddypoet_ on December 28, 2008 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply