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posted by -blackcat on January 3, 2009 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

I imagine it will be a short reprieve! sam

posted by sam444 on December 27, 2008 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

IT WAS IN THE 70'S HERE TODAY, I LIKE YOU ENJOYED IT SO MUCH, I WISH IT COULD STAY BUT I AM SURE IT WILL GO AWAY, MAN I CAN'T EVEN COMMENT WITHOUT A RHYME IT SEEMS, I HOPE NO ONE SHOOTS, I WOULD LIKE TO HEAR MORE, THANKS , KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 27, 2008 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

Nice stuff, O modest One!

posted by _teddypoet_ on December 27, 2008 at 12:24 PM | link to this | reply

'salright. It gets the message across no Problem!

posted by merkie on December 27, 2008 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

Ariala

You – rhyming –who dah thunk it!!!  

posted by Troosha on December 27, 2008 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala ~.~

I know rhyming poems are not your favorite, but this is truly a fine one. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on December 27, 2008 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

cordwainer, hahahaha, you're a poet and you don't know it. your feet are

a couple of longfellows LOL

posted by Ariala on December 27, 2008 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

sounds of falling rain can be hynotic /dripping, dropping all around, /nature is rhyming, /you have been taken, /but rest assured /my faith in you as a poet / falters not, nor is unshaken.

posted by cordwainer on December 27, 2008 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

Mystereo, thanks, I'll keep my day job

posted by Ariala on December 27, 2008 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

shelly, hahahaha

posted by Ariala on December 27, 2008 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

go outside...maybe the lightning will strike you down. LOL

posted by shelly_b on December 27, 2008 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

Great piece keep wriring and trying.

posted by Mystereo on December 27, 2008 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply