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You have some very interesting thoughts (and I often find them within within myself ). In this one, like how you weave the inner intention of the soul (picking up the pieces)while being in its outer reality which isn't going to change right now. What I like most is how you seem to imply an interconnection, without being naive about it--mostly by retaining an inner tension within the piece between all that is pre-known and all that is possible. Wonderful understatement: message received.
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jfm32
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December 28, 2008
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wow this one I really like, good job
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lustorlove
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December 27, 2008
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MASTER PIECE! Love for the change in humans, what a gift of love, by faith!
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Mystereo
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December 27, 2008
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goodmorning SAM!!!!
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9STAR
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December 27, 2008
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Very beautiful...........
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Corbin_Dallas
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December 27, 2008
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Just beautifully expressed Sammy... touching and moving, passionate and ardently said. A masterpiece :-) Luuuuuuve you xoxoxoxo
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Sinome
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December 26, 2008
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Absolutely awesome, my most adorable sis. Peace, the first precondition to happiness, is so very well pictured, and our dear Shelly's mastery is no less than Shelley's, about whiose poetry I wrote in my last post.
from my cool desert sands to yours . You are a star
, most sane.
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Bhaskar.ing
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December 26, 2008
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Yep! This is my kinda writing!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 26, 2008
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#13
Fluid...Polished and Crystal Clear. I surely do wish it was in me to write like that. Keep on!
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Texas_Gem
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December 26, 2008
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I love the dream like quality
What a vivid and visionary poem. Blessings in the new year.
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4thechildren
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December 26, 2008
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Absolutely Beautifull Sam! Chris.
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Scramble
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December 26, 2008
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Beautiful
Peace is the key to life. Thanks for such a great poem.
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Kolekshuns
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December 26, 2008
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riri0322
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December 26, 2008
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Peace ~the vision of the heart in love! May we all envision more peace as a blanket of healing. Good write Shelly!
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merkie
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December 26, 2008
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Beautiful, deep and vivid
I loved this poem, even as I agree with metalrat's comment. Wonderful write as always
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lionreign
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December 26, 2008
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The conflict that rages within each person...
...is a microcosm of the strife in the world. There will be no peace outside until there is peace within.
Gripping poem, sam.
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metalrat
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December 26, 2008
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Powerful and FANTASTIC.....I pray for peace...xxxooo
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hazel_st_cricket
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December 26, 2008
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Yes! A poignant message for the world.
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EX_TURPI
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December 26, 2008
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sam ~.~
A beautiful message -- may each of us have such encounters. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
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December 26, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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December 26, 2008
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Sam
The two closing lines were perfection! We're all pretty much a bunch of interlocking pieces....
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Troosha
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December 26, 2008
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