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Tender moments..of wild times in a rushed youth. An intriguing and fine haiku.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 25, 2009 at 10:23 PM
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Naut
The word I would have used was poignant, I see it's already been said..
posted by
mneme
on April 20, 2009 at 5:37 AM
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This is another one of my faves by you... that last line drove it home! Excellent!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 19, 2009 at 4:28 AM
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This is very poignant and stirring.
Shelly's right, you are so good at hiaku.
posted by
metalrat
on January 2, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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I am with TAPS. I wish you would do more of these. I have read this one three times now. I want more please....
~peace
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 29, 2008 at 5:36 AM
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Such awesome imagery! You are so good at Haikus!! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 26, 2008 at 3:06 AM
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Quite an image, Nautikos. I'm wondering if I'm seeing while I read it the same things you were seeing when you wrote it. I imagine that each reader sees something that is painted in their own memories. Write more of these, a lot more often please.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 25, 2008 at 6:14 PM
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So few words so much exposed like a picture captured by the click of the shutter. Bravo.
posted by
merkie
on December 23, 2008 at 5:17 PM
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touching words.thank you
posted by
rubypoem
on December 23, 2008 at 4:59 AM
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Very nice, Nautikos
posted by
Ariala
on December 23, 2008 at 4:21 AM
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