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Tender moments..of wild times in a rushed youth. An intriguing and fine haiku.

posted by yellowrose55 on August 25, 2009 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Naut

The word I would have used was poignant, I see it's already been said..

posted by mneme on April 20, 2009 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

This is another one of my faves by you... that last line drove it home! Excellent!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 19, 2009 at 4:28 AM | link to this | reply

This is very poignant and stirring.

Shelly's right, you are so good at hiaku.

posted by metalrat on January 2, 2009 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

I am with TAPS. I wish you would do more of these. I have read this one three times now. I want more please.... ~peace

posted by OTA. on December 29, 2008 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

Such awesome imagery! You are so good at Haikus!! Shelly

posted by sam444 on December 26, 2008 at 3:06 AM | link to this | reply

Quite an image, Nautikos.  I'm wondering if I'm seeing while I read it the same things you were seeing when you wrote it.   I imagine that each reader sees something that is painted in their own memories.  Write more of these, a lot more often please.

posted by TAPS. on December 25, 2008 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

So few words so much exposed like a picture captured by the click of the shutter. Bravo.

posted by merkie on December 23, 2008 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

touching words.thank you

posted by rubypoem on December 23, 2008 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice, Nautikos

posted by Ariala on December 23, 2008 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply