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Awsome write for the light for all to see, knowledge of self.

posted by Mystereo on December 27, 2008 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

The blog that became a COMMENT:

Perhaps enchanted by your poetry, I blogged within the area of your sovereignty and so my blog has now become a COMMENT

posted by Rotsen on December 25, 2008 at 1:56 AM | link to this | reply

BORN TO BLUSH UNSEEN

She came like a thunder in the night,  

A zonic boom of a jumbo jet that staggered and knocked

me from the uneasy conundrum of my loneliness. Suddenly

she was there live and surreal - an anaconda recoiling my heart,

and squeezing me to death. Suddenly she let go her hold and

looked into my eyes where I read her thirst and hunger for love.

I rose to hold her in my arms, not a word from the lips muted by 

the volumes of unspoken exchanges. The mind hears what the

heart speaks. She gazed into my eyes endlessly and as my own tired

eyelids blinked she was gone. She came like a thunder in the night.

And like a splash in the pond, she was born to blush unseen.

 

 

posted by Rotsen on December 25, 2008 at 1:37 AM | link to this | reply

One cannot maintain any kind of relationsip with a liar--but it can take a

long-long time to identify a liar! Well done Sam.Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 23, 2008 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

Very well said, sam ~.~

I am familiar with "harm's way." Great write. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on December 23, 2008 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on December 23, 2008 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Good choice

Good poem too.  A relationship cannot be based on lies if it is to be a healthy one, no matter what the relationship, it has to be at least 90% reality all the time.

posted by lionreign on December 23, 2008 at 6:37 AM | link to this | reply

Well done and good decision!

posted by Ariala on December 23, 2008 at 4:33 AM | link to this | reply

wonderful.seems like a wise decision to be made in the end.your writing is excellent.thank you for the read

posted by rubypoem on December 23, 2008 at 4:30 AM | link to this | reply

A good point

very well made as usual!

posted by malcolm on December 23, 2008 at 4:09 AM | link to this | reply

My dear Shelly

I can so relate to this wonderful piece my friend; so many are taken in in this way and live their whole lives waiting...... many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on December 23, 2008 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

Courageous and bold.. your poem is a step up for truth. I read this one 3 times.

posted by yellowrose55 on December 22, 2008 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Good for you girl... You tell him!  Beautifully expressed rightful indignation.  He deserves to be shawned.  Many of us should learn from you :-)   xoxo

posted by Sinome on December 22, 2008 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

Very great commentary on dishonesty.

posted by EX_TURPI on December 22, 2008 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

Well done, Shelly!

posted by _teddypoet_ on December 22, 2008 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem, sam, stay clear of proclamations of false love..xxooo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on December 22, 2008 at 12:58 PM | link to this | reply

I took myself out of your harm’s way

Good for you

Merry Christmas dear Sam

posted by Lotus_Flower on December 22, 2008 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Sad, the games the heartless play...

..I know this scenario well too.. Good for you, Dear Sam, for holding onto your heart and calling them out!  

posted by PoetRaye on December 22, 2008 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

How many people there are that think they are the center of the universe. It takes a lot of grains of sand to make a beach!!

posted by merkie on December 22, 2008 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

Afternoon sam...

Old/new rewrite in random blog & new post from book 10 x

posted by contagion_publishing on December 22, 2008 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

you cannot love because you live a lie.

unfortunately i know someone so like that. i wish you only smiles sam .  i have a few friends over and they have just read your lines- we are gonna have a long night of comtemplation.

posted by bythewindowsill on December 22, 2008 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply