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Awsome small powerful punch of life.
posted by
Mystereo
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December 27, 2008
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The second line is outstanding .Agony surrounded by Faith and Grace Culmination ressurection!Amen
posted by
merkie
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December 22, 2008
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sam, so much said in so few words..another gem to keep for personal
reference and to share in Bible study (as long as it's ok?)...
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posted by
Rumor
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December 22, 2008
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Excellent haiku, Sam!
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 22, 2008
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Now that is a beautiful piece
short and powerful - like being punched by Bruce Lee! Very well done
posted by
lionreign
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December 22, 2008
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powerful!and a thorn in our sides to remember!!thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
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December 22, 2008
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sam ~.~
Such a beautiful piece -- salvation's story in three lines. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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December 22, 2008
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A wonderful piece my dear Shelly!
timely and appropriate; very well done my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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December 22, 2008
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Quite appropriate! If the only crown Christ got was one of thorns, why should those with the crown of riches lead the thrust of the different religions? I think its only a big show and the really genuine people are always wearing thorns!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 21, 2008
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Succinct and meaningful... leave it to you to create such a jewl of a Haiku xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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December 21, 2008
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Impacts very powerfully,sis.
&
to you and yours.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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December 21, 2008
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Your Haiku shares an enormous message.
posted by
yellowrose55
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December 21, 2008
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Deep and poignant.
posted by
calia14
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December 21, 2008
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Shelly
Fabulous haiku! I haven't even thought about haiku lately, but this is certainly an inspiration...
posted by
Nautikos
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December 21, 2008
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beauty, direct and powerful...xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 21, 2008
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