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Whoa! What more and I say. That took the cake. Magic, control.Ending direct
posted by
Mystereo
on December 24, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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Wow again Your words and pictures match the subject matter to a tee! Burning flames of creative bliss for all to enjoy!
posted by
merkie
on December 21, 2008 at 10:34 AM
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I loved the graphics, the way your verses came on and changed.
But perhaps you could slow it down and enhance the romance. It goes so fast this reader can't really absorb the mood before the next frame appears.
write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on December 21, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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I couldn't get to read the post !
posted by
afzal50
on December 21, 2008 at 3:36 AM
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It didnt load for me at all!!
posted by
adnohr
on December 20, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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Hey this one is four-dimensional?
posted by
Straightforward
on December 20, 2008 at 7:55 PM
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Holy cow mermaid, I've seen some cool shit on this site, but that takes the cake!!
posted by
calia14
on December 20, 2008 at 5:35 PM
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Tre intersant! Feel you started hitting your stide (whatever that is).
Every time I read you, I remember this mural artist working on my block when I was livng in NYC, and hanging out, he says quite professionally to me, "I don't want the money, I just want the fame."
Spoken like a true artist! And he didn't even mind dying first, just to be remembered as being part of something.
There is something very strange about art, and you got it. Too bad that what you are doing on the net can't be sold--or can it? Have you thought about bringing your tech into a physical place, like a gallery?
What you need is a showing, a place to exhibit.
I once loaned money to Alan Gitler to finish his Gitler Guitar--a stainless steel, fretless, masterpiece. He never sold it to, but got it in exhibition in the Metropolitan Museum Of Modern Art.
Here's what I'm saying: if you moved your ideas and tech from the net to a gallery setting, you might be able to find a life and future in Art (eveything is in its presentation and who is presenting it). Now, this is just an idea of possibility, but I don't present this notion to just anybody.
Now, about this one I'm looking at: hey, I'm a slow reader, so why is this going so fast and disappearing before I can read the whole thing?
They do this same thing on TV and it bothers me becuase it vanishes before I can finish it.
Now, what if I could control my own read (even if I had to hit "Next"?)
In your 2nd flash, I'm reading as fast as I can and come across "paraoxism". This seems like an important word to the thought, and I want to dwell upon it. But no, even the next 3 lines have vanished, and you are flashing me another thought.
Now I'm getting angry--real angry. It is as if you invited me into your mind-space, never appear, and play a dissapearance game with me. So what am I suppossed to do, read your mind?
Maybe I'm just a Sancho, traveling with the Don Quiotes of this world. But wouldn't it be nice, with one stroke of a pen, or genious, to account for all the little Sanchos' of the world. After all, we did learn how to read, and can appreciate art too.
posted by
jfm32
on December 20, 2008 at 12:53 PM
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Thank you Jen... that was awesome! You are becoming an expert at this extraordinary presentations... they so enhance your beautiful poems :-)
posted by
Sinome
on December 20, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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very nice I like this one best
posted by
Lanetay
on December 20, 2008 at 9:32 AM
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I love your deep imagination.Thanks for the read
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 20, 2008 at 8:51 AM
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That was hot!
Nothing to be guilty about.
posted by
metalrat
on December 20, 2008 at 8:02 AM
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Wow
This certainly awoke me from my flu-like stupor
posted by
malcolm
on December 20, 2008 at 7:13 AM
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