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Incredible and deeply moving, Sam..
The tragedy of little Caylee Anthony comes to mind and through hearts breaking everywhere..
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PoetRaye
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December 21, 2008
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Be proactive and protect the innocent! Amen
posted by
merkie
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December 21, 2008
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AMEN-to you added statement Sam! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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December 21, 2008
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Deep very deep and heartful see how the pen releases and venting good.
I know this. That took a lot heart and courage! Now it's cast away from within to the paper. Trap on that page forever great write. Now poet up!
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Mystereo
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December 21, 2008
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Extremely painful and touching !
posted by
afzal50
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December 20, 2008
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how sad
posted by
lustorlove
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December 20, 2008
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That was gripping!
posted by
calia14
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December 20, 2008
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Sam, that shook me to he core!
as always, your poem is powerful, and moving. I love to read you.
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muley12
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December 20, 2008
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Heart wrenching.... that there is so much abuse in the world directed towards children or anyone. It needs to STOP.Your poem, such a Passionately sad portrait of a plea to understand a monstrous wrong.




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yellowrose55
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December 20, 2008
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the sad part is there are probably alot of children that could say that
posted by
ladychardonnay
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December 20, 2008
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Poignant and powerful message.
posted by
metalrat
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December 20, 2008
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Hard for me to comment on this--don't have the direct experience, but seems to me a beuatifully written letter.
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jfm32
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December 20, 2008
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What a wonderful depiction of a problem more prevalent in our cosiety than we care to admit. Great work SAmmy xoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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December 20, 2008
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Terribly sad. I can relate to neglect. Anyway, wishing
you a wonderful new year and Merry Xmas.
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Winged
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December 20, 2008
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Terrific! One thing that's better about the modern world is that we can talk openly about child abuse, incest and so on. Before it certainly went on, but nobody dared to talk about it.
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elinjo
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December 20, 2008
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What a sensitive portrayal, and how true.....a brash exterior can hide so much fear and pain. God bless. Nita.
posted by
snowview
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December 20, 2008
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The message was delievered. Nice work
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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December 20, 2008
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wonderfully written, sam...I'm tearing up..well said, my friend..xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 20, 2008
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Wow
posted by
Troosha
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December 20, 2008
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Heavy
but necessary words.
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malcolm
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December 20, 2008
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