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Wow, powerfully conveyed, Dear Sam!...
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 21, 2008
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Awesome
poetry always.....the
rhythm,
flow and
message are
solid.
posted by
yellowrose55
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December 20, 2008
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Speechless!
posted by
Mystereo
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December 20, 2008
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Shelly
He's been told off well! I can see him slinking away, with his tail beteen his legs...
posted by
Nautikos
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December 20, 2008
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You tell him, Sam. Don't mince any words. Tell it like it is.
posted by
TAPS.
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December 20, 2008
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Good!
posted by
Whacky
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December 19, 2008
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You tell them love.
posted by
BC-A
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December 19, 2008
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The poem is instantly attractive despite the abhorrence for a relationship, one-sided, empty,only lusted for, and the message is one of
lust to be placed upon the shelf to gather dust!. Very delightful do I find it, and am sending 
and admiration for my dear sis Shelly.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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December 19, 2008
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You go girl! That is telling him :-)
posted by
Sinome
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December 19, 2008
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That's deep! I'd hate to be the person receiving this message. Very
straightforward. Good poem.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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December 19, 2008
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Another great read from you
I love it lol...pun intended...I love the lines
And I am not a prize, or a trophy, or your lust / to be placed upon the shelf to gather dust! I can relate to this so much right now...and can't wait to dig into your past work...also thank you for taking time out to read and comment on my work...I apperciate it so much
posted by
dathippiekid
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December 19, 2008
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my problem is I love them all
posted by
lustorlove
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December 19, 2008
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It isn't easy to bring oneself to say that, is it?
posted by
Straightforward
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December 19, 2008
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yes, that's the ticket
posted by
Samantha39
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December 19, 2008
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7:04 PM
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Poetic honesty, beautifully stated. Bravo.
posted by
asign
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December 19, 2008
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Whoa you told him Shelly! You really get the emotion displayed! Great imagery. Shelly sam.
posted by
merkie
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December 19, 2008
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I am glad I did not get this response. That is cruel.
posted by
EX_TURPI
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December 19, 2008
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Oh Wow
So to the point. Sounds like you had an encounter with someone truly arrogant who deserves your dismissal and scorn. You sounded so wonderfully haughty. I'd love to be like that!!
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
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December 19, 2008
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2:48 PM
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Polite and beauiful way to tell someone to buzz off...xxxooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 19, 2008
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