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To write that much and not lose the attention of the writer great.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 20, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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Your words leak out the inner emotions that we hold inside us.
posted by
BC-A
on December 20, 2008 at 7:08 AM
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I couldn't ...
... get a grasp on whole of it but, I found passages that I could relate as a whole (but, it's my interpretation ... it could be wrong) - I found power and stumbling - well written - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 20, 2008 at 6:41 AM
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dathippiekid ~.~
Great imagery...that goes beyond -- wonderfully descriptive passages. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 20, 2008 at 5:24 AM
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stunning images! very bold ... fantastic
posted by
bythewindowsill
on December 20, 2008 at 12:09 AM
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strong imagery and quite powerful poem! welcome aboard!
posted by
Ariala
on December 19, 2008 at 6:19 PM
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Superb imagery - A piece that solitits one's emotions and dares the reader to sink deeper into the journey. Well done!
posted by
asign
on December 19, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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Welcome! This is a most wonderful post! I enjoyed the images and flow of this! Excellent work! Thank you for stopping by my blog!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 19, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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