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Breathtaking words and visuals. Kudos Mermaid Encore!

posted by merkie on December 21, 2008 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

Hey En...My dad SFJoseph....tried to comment on this and he just wanted to say "Fantastic write"!

posted by Wigopa_ on December 20, 2008 at 12:14 AM | link to this | reply

Wow!

That is awesome!

posted by Whacky on December 19, 2008 at 11:15 PM | link to this | reply

A beautifully creative choice and presentation love.

posted by BC-A on December 19, 2008 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

our prayers are with you. love you

posted by muley12 on December 19, 2008 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

wow you are really growing with your poems and effects, I cant figure out how you figure all this out

posted by lustorlove on December 19, 2008 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

She could go all the way! Outstanding what a Master Piece you are always.

Always after my heart, waving my mind and you know you warm my soul. God blessed!

posted by Mystereo on December 19, 2008 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

What a vivid presentation - both in words and display. You have a lucid and creative mind.

posted by EX_TURPI on December 19, 2008 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on December 19, 2008 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

Splendid work indeed !

posted by afzal50 on December 19, 2008 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent presentation my dear Jen

although I found the words changed too quickly? many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on December 19, 2008 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Really nice! All I can say is WOW!

posted by adnohr on December 19, 2008 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

Astounding visuals!

And the verse is so enchanting - excellent work!..  

posted by PoetRaye on December 18, 2008 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

DREAMY!

what a wonderful surprise to wait and see what will appear on the screen, and then.......oh!!so beautiful, and the way the 'sparkles' soak up the words, you supply us with a visionary delight.and your writing is soft, touching, and heartfelt - 'manoeuvred by the light of her heart' 'gentlest clouds clothe the roughness of her path' - how beautiful a dream was created.lovely.thank you.

 

posted by rubypoem on December 18, 2008 at 10:56 PM | link to this | reply

Truly marvelous work dear Jen..

posted by Wigopa_ on December 18, 2008 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply