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Hey Jeannie This is so creative and absolutely beautiful. Excellent expression of your many talents!

posted by merkie on December 21, 2008 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

that was gorgeous. great color scheme to compliment the hopeful words

posted by Luz_Briar on December 18, 2008 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Took me a couple of times, you are very gift you really putting in the work

Outstanding work always in your coner. So gifted! Thank you.

posted by Mystereo on December 18, 2008 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Ahhhh!

I can't read that fast...lol. Nice post. Thank you.

posted by Fledgeling_Phoenix on December 18, 2008 at 5:34 PM | link to this | reply

Very Interesting

I am amazed at just how many facets there are to you girl...You are such a diamond brilliant.  It was just a little fast for me to read but great stuff, please do more

posted by Color_Your_Life on December 18, 2008 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

an amazing read, not only with all your creativity involved, but a vivid lonely night image swimming into dawn and a new start. wonderful. thank you for the read.amazing!!!

posted by rubypoem on December 18, 2008 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful !

posted by afzal50 on December 18, 2008 at 3:18 AM | link to this | reply

I haven't been in Blogit long, so can't say it is your best poem. I will say it is very beautiful, as is all of your writing that I have been lucky enough to read.

posted by adnohr on December 17, 2008 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

Just beautiful Jen!!!!! amazing ... How did you do that?  You are such an artist :-)  and the poem was fabulous... truly one of your best so far :-)

posted by Sinome on December 17, 2008 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

I am sure it is grand..though it is not loading for me....

posted by Wigopa_ on December 17, 2008 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

powerpoint....

posted by 9STAR on December 17, 2008 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply