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You tried to be slick with this piece, deep insight for knowledge of self.

posted by Mystereo on December 24, 2008 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful Romantic rhythm...

posted by yellowrose55 on December 18, 2008 at 11:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: 'charmed by the spell of your lips'

Thanks, that is one of favorite phrases from this poem.  Sometimes I astound myself.

It has both the thought rhyming of charm with spell and spell with lips, as well as the near sound inversion/mirroring of "spell" and "lips" . Perfect sound mirroring would be "spill" and "lips".  Besides, the cadence of the meter helps it triply nicely off the tongue. -|..-|..-

Thanks again for the appreciative comment.

Cheers,
Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on December 18, 2008 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: cpklapper

Thanks,

She is someone I haven't seen in a year but occasionally share emails with.  It is complicated.

Regards,

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on December 18, 2008 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

'charmed by the spell of your lips' beautiful!love has so many tales to tell. thank you for the read.

posted by rubypoem on December 18, 2008 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

cpklapper

Seems like a well written  kind of sad memory of someone you once knew

posted by WileyJohn on December 17, 2008 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks for your comment.  I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

Merry Christmas,
Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on December 17, 2008 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful  A love story!

posted by merkie on December 17, 2008 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply