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Tender and moving... love remembered like this is a treasure.
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yellowrose55
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December 17, 2008
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I owe a lot to my first love Shelly
it was he that inspired me for most of my love poetry written at 17; I have never forgotten my college sweetheart and that was a very very long time ago! Lovely poem my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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December 17, 2008
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Very interesting style! Reminds me of The Sands O'Dee!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 16, 2008
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Sam444
Beautiful and loving memories of a love past.
posted by
WileyJohn
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December 16, 2008
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Superbly done my friend... Old loves and sweet memories that tug at our heart are always good to keep us warm on cold nights... :-) Luuuuuuve you much xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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December 16, 2008
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i have one of those..brought back many memories
posted by
MiaElla
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December 16, 2008
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sam
I hope to get to know someone better @ college the second time around love.
posted by
BC-A
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December 16, 2008
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Beautiful, beautiful.........
beautiful!
posted by
Kolekshuns
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December 16, 2008
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Beautiful form, Dear Sam!..and the mood, emotions so flowing and gentle..
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 16, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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December 16, 2008
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Most always get the feeling when I read you, this streak, a voice of Romantic Poetry (in its historical sence) I find intruiging.
posted by
jfm32
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December 16, 2008
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Great poem i love the parts, dreams are for people who dreams, loved this.
posted by
Mystereo
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December 16, 2008
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What truly tender and lovely thoughts-(Memories)-Sam! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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December 16, 2008
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Very nicely and gently done, medear. All these little secret places in our heart.... Wish me luck; I'm leaving in 20 minutes for my English exam.
posted by
auslander
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December 16, 2008
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Oh, the "secrets" some of us hold in our hearts (and I wouldn't have it any other way
). A very touching piece, Sam.
posted by
Troosha
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December 16, 2008
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how sweet. fond memories
posted by
Luz_Briar
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December 16, 2008
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magnificent and meaningful. It fits so well into this poem form. Kudos
posted by
merkie
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December 16, 2008
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This is so indescribably beautiful, and straight from the heart....the last line has so much depth, and a sense of acceptance and deep inner peace. God bless. Nita.
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snowview
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December 16, 2008
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wonderful and sentimentally beautiful, my friend....xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 16, 2008
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Warm and sweet
posted by
calia14
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December 16, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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December 16, 2008
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Beautiful
posted by
skye08
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December 16, 2008
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This is very touching and adorable.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 16, 2008
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I am amazed
That you are able to work with such refined emotive focus in such a strict format - well done!
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lionreign
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December 16, 2008
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