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Great poem I have to read it a couple of time!
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Mystereo
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December 16, 2008
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The rendition is masterly, deft, and incredibly awesome. What a wondrful poetess you are my sis! From you Bro with a heart full of
in admiration.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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December 16, 2008
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You describe it well, but much ado about anything
doesn't usually solve that which causes it
in the first place.
posted by
TAPS.
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December 16, 2008
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Nice, sam
posted by
SpitFire70
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December 15, 2008
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Me too.
lovely.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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December 15, 2008
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I love every word and the way it's constructed.
My eyes cry red, then blue! ....Classic, sam.
posted by
metalrat
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December 15, 2008
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well done girl......
posted by
Samantha39
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December 15, 2008
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I trule admire your work with words and the many different forms you use. Great job once again.
posted by
Brickhouse
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December 15, 2008
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Interesting and subtle attack on the senses, as if recipie could be supplied by numbers. More interesting is that random numbers can not not make a recipie.
posted by
jfm32
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December 15, 2008
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I like it too! But I have a confession to make; when I read the title, at first I thought you were going to write about teenagers. You see Ado in French is short for Adolescent. Funny how languages can mingle and change your perception of the world (or the words).
And between you and I, what does "Ado" really means in English, medear
(I know it is not about teenagers. LOL)?
posted by
auslander
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December 15, 2008
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Sammy this is wonderful... insightful and inspiring... Lovely though and through Love you much...xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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December 15, 2008
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"The Past Is Just Goodbye"---I love this Sam! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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December 15, 2008
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VERY NICE AND DIFFERENT, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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December 15, 2008
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Ditto to lionrein's comment. Another form to try hmmmm a challenge
Good one Sam. clever insight in your poem!
posted by
merkie
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December 15, 2008
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Tres bien!
posted by
_Decshak
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December 15, 2008
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Wonderful my dear friend, just wonderful!
posted by
robinrn
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December 15, 2008
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more genius...
you poems are an inspiration in form and content - this is awesome!
posted by
lionreign
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December 15, 2008
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from me to you
posted by
9STAR
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December 15, 2008
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Most Excellent, Dear Sam!
(formerly Katray here..:)...
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 15, 2008
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This is a work of a master craftsman and the ending is extraordinary.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 15, 2008
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Love it my friend!
short and oh so to the point! Simple brilliance Shelly; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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December 15, 2008
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'the past is just a goodbye' - as neat as that
posted by
bythewindowsill
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December 15, 2008
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"My eyes cry red, then blue", this is a unique and shocking line. And that last line - simply put, I can relate... and I need to learn to leave goodbye in the Past. I should try this form.
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yellowrose55
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December 15, 2008
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Awesome, sam..xxoo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 15, 2008
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Shelly
This is really very, very good! It's deceptively simple, until you
listen to the words and begin to reflect...
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Nautikos
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December 15, 2008
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