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Off the chain! What a deep heart dropping poem, I presume nice concept.
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Mystereo
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December 16, 2008
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So much emotion conveyed, Sam, in economy of verse..
Excellent and whole!..
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 14, 2008
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Yet the peices remain to reconstruct. Excelent sam
Shattered adds an abrupt and powerful feeling!
posted by
merkie
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December 14, 2008
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Poignant.
Deeply moved by this.
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metalrat
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December 14, 2008
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Excellent expression !
posted by
afzal50
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December 14, 2008
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Wow!
I like this. I feel it. Thanks for sharing.
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Kolekshuns
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December 14, 2008
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A perfect description
of the effects of Fibromyalgia and Chronic Fatigue Syndrome at the beginning of the path of enlightenment. The difference between these and anyother shattered self is that there are no visible signs that allow others to believe you thus the shattering all aspects of self. A very powerful poem.
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skye08
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December 14, 2008
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Down but not out. Excellent.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 13, 2008
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short..sweet..and tragic. That word Shattered just changes everything.
posted by
yellowrose55
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December 13, 2008
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Great metaphor
Nicely done.
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calia14
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December 13, 2008
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