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A lovely poem ...
... to a sensitive dreamer who didn't fulfil her innermost desires, as from what I understand of your poem ... but dreaming is vital for all of us and may make us stretch a little further to find what we're longing for - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 14, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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So lovely and gifting..
posted by
Katray2
on December 14, 2008 at 7:38 AM
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and I am so honored!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear purple, you are always so dear to me......thank you for the poem, isn't it rhymes meme???? Doesn't it has a song style??? Just like all your songs, I LOVE THIS TOO...........BUT SURE YOU MADE ME HAPPY!!!!!
something about some people we mysteriously know and it makes us connected......
simply like the best tune!!!!!!!!!!!!
love,
sue
posted by
Star5_
on December 14, 2008 at 7:30 AM
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All I can say it WOW! Very nice!
posted by
adnohr
on December 13, 2008 at 9:45 PM
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Most excellent work Jen! Lovely, stunning, Beautiful...and wonderful...
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 13, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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lovely my dear
posted by
Samantha39
on December 13, 2008 at 8:30 PM
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Thanks for your comment on my last post, and that you could break open a smile is one of my greatest joys, because now I can smile back (just my job).
It's getting harder for me to comment on your work because I lack the words, because it is what it is, while I still get the feeling of something more cosmic, and which is only comparable (on our own mental plane) as some of the dimensions of the Black Hole Theory as devised as Quantum Physics and the String Theory.
To make my story short, I already belive in and participate in Mysticism. So while the Black Hole Therory has now reached into its 3rd dimension (where it now thinks about itself), how is it going to arrive to the 5th, 10th, or 16th dimension?
Well, it's not my job to be confused right now, and its probably one of those inner-directional things. But no longer can I go
through the process of thesis to antithesus. Just give me the propositions and let me transcend them by myself.
Now about your art? It's like the Black Hole, which is matter so dense it has to be antimatter, but there is no line of demarcation, because when you're there, you are no place else, and when and if it implodes, the only thing left would be a memory upon a screen, and this would be our own hollagram.
The only problem I got with the String Theory is that it does not explain how we came to think about what we are thinking about, and ain't that the big secret!
posted by
jfm32
on December 13, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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See now you are going to make me cry. Deep insight and content amazing!
Hat off! You just touch on so many bases the ending made me reach out the I realize it's a screen. You should be smiling what a gift!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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What a beautiful tribute Jen... sweet and wonderful poem :-)
posted by
Sinome
on December 13, 2008 at 5:40 PM
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