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Your closing is unorthodox but promotes the mind to question the poem and the era of discovery. Have things changed much?
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merkie
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December 21, 2008
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Interesting images, of a woman dancing for men....Very well done John!
posted by
Wigopa_
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December 14, 2008
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I like this one! It made me smile! Kudos!~ sam
posted by
sam444
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December 14, 2008
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Ahhhh.....and so are the days gone to slop the pig for some sausage........
posted by
Krisles
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December 13, 2008
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my fine sir, I was so drawn seriously digesting the lines...until "the cow and milk" hit my eyes and switched to smile involuntarily...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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December 13, 2008
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I loved this poem... I am sure many will take offense to " feed your cow and milk it" but since I am no cow I do not care... I am more like a cheeta... or a leopardess...yes I identify more with the feline kind, I even have been known to purr .... but I digress. your poem is wonderful.
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Sinome
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December 13, 2008
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were you just watching me in the window??
posted by
ladychardonnay
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December 13, 2008
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Well I'm lost in love, you are off the meter what a concept. Whoa!
posted by
Mystereo
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December 13, 2008
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