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A master piece for this defines the human conflect is with our true selfs

posted by Mystereo on December 16, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

i love this!!!!!

posted by duracell on December 14, 2008 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Raw depth....wise and questioning. The human heart falters, there is splendor in frailty. Love this poem.

posted by yellowrose55 on December 13, 2008 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

A wonderful depiction of human frailty.

posted by hardilaziz on December 13, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

love can be confusing

posted by Samantha39 on December 13, 2008 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

speaking of mazes and such, this poem is like a word maze

posted by Luz_Briar on December 13, 2008 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

Like a walk on the highwire we need to attain a balance between the ecstasy and remorse. Well done Shelly/Sam

posted by merkie on December 13, 2008 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

I love you and I hate you at the same time....yes, let freedom ring---

posted by LaLoba on December 13, 2008 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

i live in a daily torrent of emotions and i see that love and hate
are two sides of the same coin...what I want to know is who the heck keeps flipping it?

posted by mysteria on December 13, 2008 at 10:57 AM | link to this | reply

Love to love, hate to hate, without exception :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on December 13, 2008 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome is the right word... Cricket used it first but I agree wholeheartedly with her.  Just for the record I love to love and hate to hate :-)  ( with a few exceptions loll)  I luuuve you and your poetry I adore... Take care of you Sammy and all the best xoxo

posted by Sinome on December 13, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

Great illustration, Shelly!

posted by _teddypoet_ on December 13, 2008 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

very wonderful..you are very talented, sam...awesome

posted by hazel_st_cricket on December 13, 2008 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

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