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Good JOB!
Absolutely loved it! All I have to say is wow! You are very good, the poem was great, and the idea of adding the poem to the graphics, NICE!

posted by NMaize on May 7, 2009 at 1:03 AM | link to this | reply

how sad

posted by Lanetay on January 1, 2009 at 9:34 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, there are a lot of different things that can emprison us and take away our freedom.
Well done.

posted by TAPS. on December 13, 2008 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

Rising the bar! You are so well rounded your words dig in to the heart deep
Knowledge and wisdom a chance to free "Black Heart" to know they are worth more then they can think. Make them see the light with in them and harbor it! For the change in humans!

posted by Mystereo on December 13, 2008 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Hi mermaid Your poem reminds me so much of my life
I can't wait to see what is on the other side of the coin...thank you for your kind comments on my blog..

Innee E Big Gettah!


posted by mysteria on December 13, 2008 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

Your work is so full of emotion....Bravo Dear Jen!

posted by Wigopa_ on December 12, 2008 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Purple
Although your poems/prose are often quite sad and painful, you certainly get your message across with undeniable creativity. 

posted by Troosha on December 12, 2008 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply