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Whoa! You touch base big time wired and insane but true really ture.
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Mystereo
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December 11, 2008
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That one speaks of a too-common occurrence. It breaks my heart to see it happen again and again.
posted by
TAPS.
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December 10, 2008
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the other woman ????
posted by
9STAR
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December 10, 2008
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the fears that rule in relationships and drag a blanket of deception. Bravo Sam
posted by
merkie
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December 10, 2008
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I love that short poem, and it says so much
posted by
lustorlove
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December 10, 2008
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Touching expression indeed ...
posted by
afzal50
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December 10, 2008
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Sam
.... the hardest words to say.
posted by
Troosha
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December 10, 2008
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wow...
this poem was short, a bit like a rabbit punch of pure sadness. Beautifully written
posted by
lionreign
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December 10, 2008
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sad and meaningful
posted by
Katherine_Ann
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December 10, 2008
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sam ~.~
"Soft Spoken Words" ...short and sweet (enough said). Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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December 10, 2008
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So much is said in just a few short words. Giant medear!
posted by
auslander
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December 10, 2008
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Beautiful poem, Sammy! Mal
posted by
gapcohen
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December 10, 2008
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In a very few words you have said it all my dear Shelly
there is a very big story in this little poem; my prayers and many blessings to you my friend always
posted by
mariaki
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December 10, 2008
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Ah ha! Now I understand. Hang in there, babe. We're rootin' for ya!
posted by
_Decshak
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December 10, 2008
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Short, sweet and to the point....
....with nice rhyme and flow. I like it!
posted by
metalrat
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December 9, 2008
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Stirring the heart, so much said in so few words.
I agree with Nautikos. I have experienced a slow and quiet break.....my choice. Hard lesson. I won't do that again.
posted by
yellowrose55
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December 9, 2008
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Shelly
Letting go softly can be more painful than the swift and tumultuous break...
posted by
Nautikos
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December 9, 2008
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Fantastic poem
I know so many people in this situation, yet they stay in it for their own
selfish excuses, unhappily. Life is too short! Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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December 9, 2008
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 9, 2008
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This is terrrific. I like its firm undertone.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 9, 2008
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Wow SAmmy... So much feeling in so little words... I am amazed at you r talent my friend. xoxoxo Marta
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Sinome
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December 9, 2008
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