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Light bright light for humans to see brun this lihgt and never die. Wow!

posted by Mystereo on December 11, 2008 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

be the first to walk away... beautiful

posted by hardilaziz on December 9, 2008 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent. emancipation a tremendous choice .Another step on the rocky path.

posted by merkie on December 9, 2008 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

Sammy... this is so sadly wonderful... and appropriate  since I have a friend who seems to have decided to emancipate himself from the chains that held him.  I could not be happier for him.  Your words could come out of his soul, so closely they portray the internal battle with which he has had to deal for a long time, being in the claws of a terrible woman.  Truly my friend you are very sensitive to the vibrations of the universe around you. Your kindness and empathy are amazing. Too bad that others lack that sensitivity and flutter around like  common, ugly   moths without shame, making holes on  fine  tapestries, envious because they can not make silk, not knowing or just not caring about the pain they inflict... Your poem Sammy is excellent.... better than that... is inspired. xoxoxo    

posted by Sinome on December 9, 2008 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Thundrous eloquence

delivers sound advice - great poem!

posted by lionreign on December 9, 2008 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, poetry indeed, Dear Sam!..so strongly reverberating..and wise..

posted by PoetRaye on December 9, 2008 at 7:44 AM | link to this | reply

sam

 When they do you hope in style at least love. For myself it makes me feel like the Billy or Bill or Bob in Sheryl Crow's song All I Want To Do is have some fun. By the way it's a September opening theme for fall.

posted by BC-A on December 9, 2008 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

YES! Just say "no" in other words. Of course, the urge to orate is

satisfied by Blogit....

posted by _Decshak on December 9, 2008 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

SWELTERING IN THE DESERT OF BEWILDERMENT, ONE OF MANY GREA LINES, GREAT POEM, THANKS ,KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 9, 2008 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

Stupendous piece my dear Shelly

wise words indeed and excellent advice!  Many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on December 9, 2008 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

So touching and meaningful , my friend ...

posted by afzal50 on December 9, 2008 at 4:17 AM | link to this | reply