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This is deep and interesting I would have never ever, never ever, never!
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Mystereo
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December 11, 2008
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Great Piece of Work
You have a unique way of expressing yourself that is impressive.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
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December 9, 2008
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A great piece of work, Sam. Fantastic.
the early bird
looking for a worm
posted by
TAPS.
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December 8, 2008
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Sam444
This is totally awesome. You could make poetry out of nothing about anything. Be blessed.
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Justi
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December 8, 2008
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Profound work, Dear Sam!
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 8, 2008
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Fascinating!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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December 8, 2008
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whoops I lost track of the break between blogs it dangerous being a worm
posted by
lustorlove
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December 8, 2008
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Shelly
Marvellously well done! It manages to be simultaneously funny and poignant...
posted by
Nautikos
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December 8, 2008
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Poor worm. I hope the red ants didn't burn him before he died. We had a
salamander standing on our sidewalk once, frozen in place and dried out.
posted by
_Decshak
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December 8, 2008
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great story poem sam. Is life a rerun ?
posted by
merkie
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December 8, 2008
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The worm does it every time, no brains in that slimy critter. Thank you Sam for putting this fun favorite of mine out there.
Looks like there's a lot of great blogs to go visit.
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yellowrose55
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December 8, 2008
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Brilliant. I had similar thoughts on a mosquito.
posted by
vogue
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December 8, 2008
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wow I don't think I had ever read a poem to an earth worm... and so cleverly done too. Your talent never ceases to amaze me :-) xoxo
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Sinome
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December 8, 2008
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great accurate poetry love
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BC-A
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December 8, 2008
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Reminds me of the 'Dune' series Shelly!
a very busy post today my friend with lots of info apart from the superb write! Many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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December 8, 2008
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Great observation of beneath the earth movements and above the earth
effects.
posted by
afzal50
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December 8, 2008
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Very cleverly done
I enjoyed this one very much - you have a way of forcing me to think
posted by
lionreign
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December 8, 2008
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you should be famous
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lestate7
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December 8, 2008
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i am always amazed by your writing, this has such wonderful imagery and is so sad, yet the earth works so perfectly within it's own system.what a unique outlook.wonderful!!thank you for the read.
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rubypoem
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December 8, 2008
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