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Well said
That was fantastic, a fun read
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calia14
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December 7, 2008
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Wow, words from my heart! - Ash
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ash_pradhan
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December 7, 2008
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That is.........
"Positive"ly fabulous!
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Corbin_Dallas
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December 7, 2008
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This one is over the top. Rhyme and reason done beautifully. This is just great. Be blessed.
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Justi
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December 7, 2008
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Yet, you did all this with perfect rhymes! Great work!
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Soul_Builder101
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December 6, 2008
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Excellent thoughts that are riveting! sam
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sam444
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December 6, 2008
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Oh! My God truely a master piece wow Jewel for light content breathe soul!
This is rising the bar whoa! Human connect planting change Fro human growth! Hat Off! Mystereo. You did this you went deep!
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Mystereo
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December 6, 2008
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Great poem Nathan... To give the heart sight its what poetry really should do, make us see with our hearts. So many think perfection in meter and rhyme is what counts... Others try to appear knowledgable by infusing their poems with ridiculously old fashion words and contractions that do not even belong in their sentences... cramming big words together to fill in space and cover up their inability to really dig into their hearts and express true feelings. I have read poems that are nothing but a collection of big words strong together in a fancy way, cold and meaningless...sometimes pretty to the ear. and other blogers read them and even though they do not understand a word they read, they comment positively because the verses sound so well done. I believe like you do that meaning is the most important factor, wether a poem is "felt" is what counts. Loved the way you expressed it.
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Sinome
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December 6, 2008
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