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I agree with Taps. The dear diary imagery comes through loud and clear,

pun and all.

posted by Straightforward on December 7, 2008 at 12:22 AM | link to this | reply

Your "Dear Diary" imagery comes through loud and clear.  Interesting.

posted by TAPS. on December 6, 2008 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

Very enjoyable!

 Thanks sam444.  Thanks for sharing. 

posted by Kolekshuns on December 6, 2008 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

Very realistic....and difficult to deal with situation!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 6, 2008 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

The mind races around the images Sam .Must be relating to them sometime or somehow!

posted by merkie on December 6, 2008 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

The truth of it all

What an amazing imagery?

posted by Color_Your_Life on December 6, 2008 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome work here!

I could picture it so clearly!

posted by Sunnybeach7 on December 6, 2008 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

How cool.... or cold I should say. Your poem just pulled me right in. Very different.

posted by yellowrose55 on December 6, 2008 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on December 6, 2008 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

I really like this one, short and to the point

posted by lustorlove on December 6, 2008 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

Really well done! I'm just glad this ain't autobiographical...

posted by Nautikos on December 6, 2008 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

great imagery. I could feel his coldness.

posted by muley12 on December 6, 2008 at 3:10 PM | link to this | reply

Gawd SAmmy... you gave me a heart attack there for a second, when I read that "this prince I carry in my womb"  part :-)  Geeeez!  but after I read the disclaimer loll I caught my breath and read it again, I found it  truly moving.  For playing with imagery it felt  real and honest.  Superb job! Love you much xoxoxo.. Pluto and all the rest of them hanging up there :-)

posted by Sinome on December 6, 2008 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply

This really touched me Sam-very much! The ending confirmed it all! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 6, 2008 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and poignant work, Sam!

 

posted by PoetRaye on December 6, 2008 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

oh, sam, how I love this style of yours: So full of imagery and of different styles! It 's style of multi-styles! Giant "medear"!

posted by auslander on December 6, 2008 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

 When it does happen the hope is that the relationship or potential relationship insist will insist on the side of one or both persons to reah out to the warmth inside the heart. And that means soul as you write our soul and inspiration. And the other other person usually fits the slipper in your poem love*

posted by BC-A on December 6, 2008 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Sam

Last two line were perfect!!!  Yup - that said it all. 

posted by Troosha on December 6, 2008 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Oh I love this poem.. ~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on December 6, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

Keep messing with it....

....it's working just fine. I love the imagery and the poignancy of it.

posted by metalrat on December 6, 2008 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Samantha39 on December 6, 2008 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

Baby it’s cold outside...
                      when you look the other way!


[Just messing with imagery]

PRETTY GOOD MESSING IF YOU ASK ME, THANKS ,KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 6, 2008 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

Love.

posted by hardilaziz on December 6, 2008 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

Sam, you are so talented.

I broke up with my fiance in March, he movd in with another woman in April. This poem hits home to me.  BTW, Thanks so much for recommending The Buzz, you are a dear friend..xxoo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on December 6, 2008 at 5:06 AM | link to this | reply

Sam ~.~

I just love this piece! Superb! ...and it's wondeerful how you promote the writings of other Blogit members. You're a very special person. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on December 6, 2008 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on December 6, 2008 at 3:33 AM | link to this | reply

Charming style !

posted by afzal50 on December 6, 2008 at 3:11 AM | link to this | reply