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Rising the bar! I tip off my hat for you took beyound death with love whoa!

posted by Mystereo on December 7, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

Interesting visual. I've been blinking back, but yet to decipher the code...though it is making me hungry because I keep seeing this blinking neon sign saying, "OPEN" with the outline of a hamburger with the steam going up. Tho the words seems illegibe, might imply they are not what is important as focus, to the piece.

With this said, I find myself traveling into the lone diners, and the trailer parks of the world. Or is it Times Square, Bangkok? And with all this glitz find myself traveling in this uderbelly of this world.

The loney road, the welcoming sign; or just exquisit sleaze? I wonder.

posted by jfm32 on December 5, 2008 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

This is a splendid piece Purple Mermaid-it truly resonated with a piece of
my past! Together with the pic-an excellent combination! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 5, 2008 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent presentation my dear Jen!
I do like your new layout and style and of course the poem is delicious! Many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on December 5, 2008 at 4:02 AM | link to this | reply

Passionate and profound indeed just like you !

posted by afzal50 on December 5, 2008 at 2:59 AM | link to this | reply

Wow, that picture is shocking!  The poem is Romeo and Juliet, that's all I kept thinking.  What a job.

posted by calia14 on December 4, 2008 at 11:45 PM | link to this | reply