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Thank you again. For your wonderful poems. They say everything I would like to say. I just sometimes can't begin to tell people how I feel. When I hurt inside no one should know.I guess I should be stronger inside myself.There is some people in this world that have no clue what love is but never will.I know ii would never in my lifetime play games or hurt any one.Fiction or fact.Thank you for letting me looking in the mirror again. I'm a pretty lady after all.I will get my cup of coffee. And read you if you are there.Thank you and god bless. Your favorite fan Rhea YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I!!!!!!!!!oooooxxxxx
posted by
muley12
on December 7, 2008 at 3:12 AM
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Purple Mermaid-I do pray that this isn't what's happening in your life
right now? It
feels to me as though it is! At the least-I hope that -if it is 'something from the past'-you have been able to come to terms with? I will hold you in my prayers-either way.Very well written-as always. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 5, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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"When I stopped fighting ...
... the war faded away" - this is the beginning of one of my songs.
Why do we fight? Is it possible to stop the battle ... or ... do we really want to stop it ? - I have a friend who don't want to stop fighting, even if he's exhausted as ... yes, very exhausted - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 4, 2008 at 1:55 PM
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Awsome! To attack your dark side write it away with you pen of light.
A jewel for self awareness, love and just knowing who you are. Thank you.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 4, 2008 at 12:59 PM
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Definitely struggling. I hope life starts to present easier choices and joy returns to you.
posted by
merkie
on December 4, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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Surrender is definetely painful...
This is excellent work, as always, Jen!
It is very cool how you have gotten those words to move.
Blessings, Dear!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on December 4, 2008 at 8:47 AM
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Wow!
Makes you feel as though you are there.
Awesome work.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 4, 2008 at 8:06 AM
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naked truth tease us so well at times
posted by
Star5_
on December 4, 2008 at 7:39 AM
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Very emotional, as always. Lovely poem.
posted by
auslander
on December 4, 2008 at 6:45 AM
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songs of a mermaid
rhea as Muleys wife was. Read you everyday. You are my inspiration love you girl!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
muley12
on December 4, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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I am saddened to think this may be what you are currently living my dear
although this is an excellent write and presented beautifully, should this be real for you please accept my prayers for your speedy recovery my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 4, 2008 at 4:26 AM
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