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I am with you sam I like the peaceful moments albeit frozen in time! Bravo!~
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merkie
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December 5, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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December 4, 2008
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Good poem
It speaks of weariness and a need for peace to me with unexpected eloquence. There are times I would like to better resist the clarion of disarrayed action.
I think the trick is to find a gentle and quiet growth, that can allows us to peacefully fulfill our lives
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lionreign
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December 4, 2008
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Powerful and such creative wordage!
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PoetRaye
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December 4, 2008
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Sam, I am confused
Very interesting: Pell-mell (from the French pêle-mêle and the ancient French mesle-mesle) seems to have changed meaning when it crossed over to English
. Or, maybe it's me who doesn't understand the meaning of your poem dear sam. For me (and I seem to be the only one
) this poem shows a bit of lack of courage in NOT wanting to change one's way. I'll go back and read it again, and again, and again until I get it.LOL
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auslander
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December 4, 2008
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Bravo my dear Shelly
you pulled out all the stops in this one my friend! It's so refreshing to see someone taking responsibility for their choices; I loved this; many blessings and thanks always
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mariaki
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December 4, 2008
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It's a great poem as usual .
posted by
afzal50
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December 4, 2008
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I'm sorry. This is, so far, over my head. I keep wondering if you have an
addiction to caffeine, lol....
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_Decshak
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December 4, 2008
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Great!
your work is truly amazing and such a pleasure to read. '
age works so handily for me', brilliant! the excuses we make.the descriptions you use are awesome.thank you for the read.
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rubypoem
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December 4, 2008
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Awesome poem.
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Kolekshuns
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December 3, 2008
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Wow...I learned a new word today, Pell-mell. A heavy word at that. (utter confusion)
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yellowrose55
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December 3, 2008
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Interesting way to seize responsibility for your actions instead of leaving it to fate or chance... A very courageous stand my friend, mature and grown up... Wow, there are not many among us that can own their actions and express it in such a poetic way. Great poem!
xoxoxo
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Sinome
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December 3, 2008
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"why provoke my chosen path"... wise decision, ma'am. Remain steadfast and focused on your goal.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 3, 2008
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Shelly
I love the way you turn that demand on its head! And thanks for the promo...
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Nautikos
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December 3, 2008
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I love it! Carpe diem! HA! Let the others seize it! I'm so feeling that right now.
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calia14
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December 3, 2008
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"For it was not the time or the tide
that washed away my dreams; it was me. "
Nice job sam.........I gotta remembe this one........zm
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ZenMom
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December 3, 2008
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Anyone who can use the word "pell-mell"
so effectively has to be a fantastic writer. Well done, once again.
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Fledgeling_Phoenix
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December 3, 2008
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