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Fantastic poem
Excellent work, once again.
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Kolekshuns
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December 4, 2008
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I'm back and your poetry is the first I looked at, I just love your work.
posted by
Brickhouse
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December 4, 2008
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Awsome! That's deep a jewel to change human thoughts setting Unity!
Your work outstanding to know is a blessing giving me courage to trust we are the furture the young poets can grow here learn to love themselves. Wow! The way you put this together magic in saddness the eagles cry for hope and change.
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Mystereo
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December 4, 2008
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excellent content !
posted by
merkie
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December 4, 2008
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A broken heart bleeds until there is something to mend it...A superb tribute Dear Jen..
posted by
Wigopa_
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December 3, 2008
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Yes it's TRAGIC-how the innocent become the victims of evil beings- because
of their greed and hatred for humanity! A Brilliant-tho'desperately sad-piece Purple Mermaid! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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December 3, 2008
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Humanity bleeds with every drop of innocent blood .
posted by
afzal50
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December 3, 2008
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Innocence is indeed a victim of evil..
..but also the sweet light of hope and faith..my prayers for
perseverance and preservation.. Powerfully expressed, Dear Friend!..
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 3, 2008
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