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Fascinating and thought inducing..
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PoetRaye
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December 4, 2008
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Are you travelling... majestic and searing portrayal. Love.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 3, 2008
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Me and my psyche
strolling down the avenue,
Me and my psyche
We're closer than pages that stick in a book.
We're closer than ripples that play in a brook.
Like the wallpaper sticks to the wall
Like the seashore clings to the sea
Like you'll never get rid of your psyche
and psyche won't get rid of me.
posted by
TAPS.
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December 3, 2008
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"traveling thru psyche / psyche traveling thru u"...hmmmmm :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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December 3, 2008
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Your poetic language leads your readers to an awesome and brillant way to get to know yourself love *
posted by
BC-A
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December 3, 2008
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Extraordinary full of wise trails to explore!Most excellent poem.
posted by
merkie
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December 3, 2008
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Sam
... a bit of both, I suppose.
posted by
Troosha
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December 3, 2008
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Good question.
posted by
_Decshak
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December 3, 2008
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Nothing could be more truly said ... Very profound and one that comes only from realization.
"When consciousness is lifted
out of time and space
past, present, and future co-exist". ... And the ending lines are simply awesome!!! So you sis.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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December 3, 2008
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I think , it's both ....
posted by
afzal50
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December 3, 2008
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Now there's a question Shelly!!!!
excellent piece my friend; very well written, thought out and presented; loved it! Many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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December 3, 2008
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I think you tied my brain in knots...
and my psyche and each other are travelling through each other in loosely defined circles...
posted by
lionreign
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December 3, 2008
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Excellent question and wonderful poem my friend. I am so happy to be back... your poem was just the thing to get me started thinking this morning... so thank you for another beautiful example of thought provoking poetry... xoxoxoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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December 3, 2008
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