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Hi the purple Jen
This is the second time I have come to read this so remarkable poem, and do take my blessings for such a lovely contribution. Hope allis well with yp and do give your cell no for Sid to talk brfore he leaves for his holidays. Love to you and Jeff and Stan and Shae
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Bhaskar.ing
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December 2, 2008
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Stunning work dear Jen...A most excellent write!
posted by
Wigopa_
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December 2, 2008
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Hello stun in you moviation your words continue dazzle my mind!
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Mystereo
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December 2, 2008
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A lovely poem....
....of a courageous life journey.
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metalrat
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December 2, 2008
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Very interesting--parallel stanzas, or two poems reflecting eachother? As I read 2nd stanza (or parallel) felt I could be reading a poem that could also stand alone--perhaps two verions of intitial intent/insight--or, if it had been written a usual vertical (poem in 2 stanzas) we might have missed the uniqueness of this study--that space and time are the silent partners in our dramas. Oh, do I feel you smiling again, and what next, a cameo? And since I missed the nail again--it's kind of like art becomes what it is when it can steal your breath away by exhalting the common place to a simple vision. Other than that, I guess there are other ways to have fun.
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jfm32
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December 2, 2008
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This is quite amazing PurpleMermaid! Chris.
(ps.Thanks for leaving your card so often)
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Scramble
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December 2, 2008
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WOW!!!!!
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9STAR
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December 2, 2008
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