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Wow!
 You leave me speechless. 

posted by Kolekshuns on December 4, 2008 at 7:00 AM | link to this | reply

Your thoughts deep real deep I'm lost me here and there still good. Deep

posted by Mystereo on December 2, 2008 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

The Seven Principles.... in this intricate poem show me all that a man is and does, in spirit before birth, throughout his life and beyond death...a spirit returning hopefully more fulfilled. This poem just boggles my mind.

posted by yellowrose55 on December 2, 2008 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply

Clever and inspiring
I like this one a great deal

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2008 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Most excellent, Dear Sam!
Time to be, indeed..

posted by PoetRaye on December 2, 2008 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

you certainly have a way with words

posted by lustorlove on December 2, 2008 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

I really like this one Shelly
a most potent theme; btw sorry to have disappeared but I just discovered you had been knocked off my faves! I was about to ask you why you hadn't posted in this blog for a few days! Glad to have you back my friend; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on December 2, 2008 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

Didn't know you were into astral projection. I tried it once in 1969 and it
seemed to work -- taking me to the future, though I couldn't identify, til 25 years later, where it took me to.

posted by _Decshak on December 2, 2008 at 4:24 AM | link to this | reply

It reminds me of seven stages of man ...
Mumbai attack is nothing but sheer failure of security network of Government of India which has opened up a Pandora's box.

posted by afzal50 on December 2, 2008 at 3:53 AM | link to this | reply

Sam444
I understood! It may not be a 100% true account of the soul sojourner but it does fuel speculation.

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 1, 2008 at 11:44 PM | link to this | reply

supernumber ain't free you are number1

new book will be out next month ! much better! I'll send it to you.

posted by lestate7 on December 1, 2008 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

Selling items
Hey, what's the deal with selling items?  How do you choose what to sell versus just post?  Do you actually loose the item when you sell it?  I see that you have items for sale and I'm hoping you know some info that I haven't been able to find elsewhere. 

posted by calia14 on December 1, 2008 at 10:46 PM | link to this | reply

there is so much here, man!!!i am still learning all your deep ways of writing, but i want to just soak it all up!! 'darker side of preconceived enlightment' 'misguided intellect' 'treading waters of ignorance' 'indecisive instincts' it forces you to think and look within and without,as you float away on the unknown, (well to me it does).thank you for your wonderful poetry!!and your words to me!

posted by rubypoem on December 1, 2008 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Awaken Indeed.
  Great Poem.  Appears to have taken quite some thought to write.

  I enjoyed it very much!

                  Well Done


posted by Kolekshuns on December 1, 2008 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

Astral plane
The rhapsodist was so convincing it caused the wayfarer
to rest in the arms of a shadowy existence and cessation 

   What an adventure!  Excellent imagery and idea!  Astral projection, huh? 

posted by calia14 on December 1, 2008 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

Nice stirring thought.

posted by hardilaziz on December 1, 2008 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

this was, is truly awesome

posted by RITE2SPIN on December 1, 2008 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply

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