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Re: Amazing! Magic a rare form seed planted and a jewel for knowledge of self

Thank you Mysterio

posted by lionreign on December 14, 2008 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

Amazing! Magic a rare form seed planted and a jewel for knowledge of self

posted by Mystereo on December 5, 2008 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hardilaziz

Thank you

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2008 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful love song.

posted by hardilaziz on December 2, 2008 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thank you, I wanted to try a different approach to love poetry with this one.  I am glad it worked.

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2008 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Great lines

I think that is fairly normal, we are all carefully (if unknowingly) trained to focus on other people rather than ourselves and it makes it difficult to really love ourselves

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2008 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

Thanks Troosha, I was trying to write a more honest and self-aware love poem than usual - I am very glad it appeals

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2008 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Stunning my dear Lion!

thanks Mariaki - I am very pleased that you enjoyed this one.

posted by lionreign on December 2, 2008 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

Until I found you and me,
There are many wonderful lines in this poem. I like the last one too! I was so refreshed with the finding of you and me. Splendid! sam

posted by sam444 on December 1, 2008 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

Great lines

I've always found it difficult to love myself - I think this is the cause of so many of my vulnerabilities

posted by malcolm on December 1, 2008 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

Until we taught me how to see  I loved this line because it’s the “we” that opens our eyes and heals us.  And, yes, we most definitely should love ourselves as much as (if not more) than we love our lover.   

posted by Troosha on December 1, 2008 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Stunning my dear Lion!

A true work of art; beautifully written my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on December 1, 2008 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply