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A feeling.....
that we all long for.....to be loved!

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blueyes_ny
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December 2, 2008
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loving deeply
Sounds Unconditional, just as love is unconditional. Makes me see some empty souls which beg to be filled with love - love that fills every crevices of the heart, mind, and soul - leaving no more space except for love. I love it Sam. I'm sure you are a lovable person
posted by
Rotsen
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December 2, 2008
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Loved the merging of souls in deep, divine love! Ethereal melody

posted by
hardilaziz
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December 1, 2008
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Sweet love glows throughout this whole poem.... Wonderful.


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yellowrose55
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December 1, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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December 1, 2008
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Shelly
Beautiful and heartfelt, and I love the way it flows...


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Nautikos
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December 1, 2008
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Hope you don't mind if I get a little off-beat, and start wondering if you want to be a poet or a nun--because the deeper songs (the prayers) are so simular. Didn't know how to take you at first, but now you got me traveling someplace without my suitcase. So wonderful to hear inner speak.
posted by
jfm32
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December 1, 2008
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"Love me deeply in your heart"-I 'specially love this line Sam! Beautifull!
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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December 1, 2008
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Love, the conquerer of time and space. Love eternal is beautifully expressed in this poem.

Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
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December 1, 2008
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Love me with all your heart as you write your poem, love *
posted by
BC-A
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December 1, 2008
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How wonderful and romantic, Dear Sam!
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 1, 2008
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posted by
RomaKay
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December 1, 2008
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Sam
Like OTA, I just wanted to sigh (a good sigh) after reading this…..Ahhhh….
posted by
Troosha
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December 1, 2008
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ahhhh.. love...

~Peace, OTA
posted by
OTA.
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December 1, 2008
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You must be a lady. Some people are surprised to find that I am a lady.
We both have handles that some people feel indicate we are men, which reminds me of a joke my mother told me when I was a kid about graffiti. One person wrote "I love grils"; another wrote, "It's girls, stupid"; a third wrote: "What about us grils?"
posted by
_Decshak
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December 1, 2008
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Sam, this is beautiful
Thank you so much for sharing this
posted by
lionreign
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December 1, 2008
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I love to be loved deeply like Sunny !!!
posted by
afzal50
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December 1, 2008
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Yes, deep love can be fulfilling
posted by
Straightforward
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December 1, 2008
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Very nice, Sam.
posted by
TAPS.
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December 1, 2008
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That is so beautiful. Thank you for writing it.
posted by
pernesegirl1
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December 1, 2008
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posted by
Wigopa_
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November 30, 2008
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A very original take on 'marriage vows'! Seems like that is the occasion most fitting for such declarations! Or, maybe for just honest love!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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November 30, 2008
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Wouldn't it be nice to have a love like that?!
Beautiful, sam.
posted by
metalrat
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November 30, 2008
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Lovely poem Shelly. Love in deep measure is hard to find. I think the line of the sands of time needs an edit. us not up??

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merkie
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November 30, 2008
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