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You are to deep you have to come to the surface what a lovey office.

posted by Mystereo on December 5, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Poignant and profound !

Thank you, brother Afzal!

posted by cpklapper on December 5, 2008 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: 'b' and not d

Don't you just hate how you can't edit your own comment after posting it?

posted by cpklapper on December 5, 2008 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Carl

Thank you!

posted by cpklapper on December 5, 2008 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Biting

Thank you much!

posted by cpklapper on December 5, 2008 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant and profound !

posted by afzal50 on December 5, 2008 at 3:07 AM | link to this | reply

'b' and not d

posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 4, 2008 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

Carl

Really, very deautifully and boldly expressed, and it brings out the esence of the poem marvelously.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 4, 2008 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

Biting

cleverly written.frustration lurks i see.thanks for the read and your words to me.

posted by rubypoem on December 1, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sarcasm?

I was going for satirical, albeit directed with a sarcastic tone.

The poem puts words in the mouths of a Representative or Senator, which I can safely do since I did not get elected.

Thanks for reading,

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on December 1, 2008 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

Sarcasm??

posted by EX_TURPI on December 1, 2008 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re:

Thank you for commiserating with me.

posted by cpklapper on December 1, 2008 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

I agree! The inhuman race wins!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 1, 2008 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply