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You are to deep you have to come to the surface what a lovey office.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 5, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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Re: Poignant and profound !
Thank you, brother Afzal!
posted by
cpklapper
on December 5, 2008 at 2:10 PM
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Re: 'b' and not d
Don't you just hate how you can't edit your own comment after posting it?
posted by
cpklapper
on December 5, 2008 at 2:10 PM
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Re: Carl
Thank you!
posted by
cpklapper
on December 5, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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Re: Biting
Thank you much!
posted by
cpklapper
on December 5, 2008 at 2:09 PM
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Poignant and profound !
posted by
afzal50
on December 5, 2008 at 3:07 AM
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'b' and not d
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 4, 2008 at 7:11 PM
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Carl
Really, very deautifully and boldly expressed, and it brings out the esence of the poem marvelously.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 4, 2008 at 7:10 PM
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Biting
cleverly written.frustration lurks i see.thanks for the read and your words to me.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 1, 2008 at 9:48 PM
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Re: Sarcasm?
I was going for satirical, albeit directed with a sarcastic tone.
The poem puts words in the mouths of a Representative or Senator, which I can safely do since I did not get elected.
Thanks for reading,
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on December 1, 2008 at 11:30 AM
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Sarcasm??
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 1, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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Thank you for commiserating with me.
posted by
cpklapper
on December 1, 2008 at 6:36 AM
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I agree! The inhuman race wins!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 1, 2008 at 12:45 AM
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