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Sometimes..Remembering can wake the heart and break the heart, love this Taps.

posted by yellowrose55 on December 10, 2008 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply

So Sweet

I like the part about being surprised less by water running uphill than forgetting about the crinkles around his lover's eyes-very descriptive and emotional.

posted by calia14 on December 8, 2008 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS

Beautiful, and very sweet...

posted by Nautikos on December 1, 2008 at 1:43 PM | link to this | reply

Marvelous indeed...

posted by _teddypoet_ on December 1, 2008 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Great cadence, imagery and the thoughts were very, very moving! Bravo! sam

posted by sam444 on November 30, 2008 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: TAPS-Absolutely Beautifull! Chris.

I'm really Happy about that TAPS! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 30, 2008 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

JUST BEAUTIFUL , TAPS, MUST BE A WONDERFUL SWEET MEMORY, HOW COULD YOU EVER FORGET? , THANKS FOR SHARING, KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on November 30, 2008 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS-Absolutely Beautifull! Chris.

Thanks, Scramble.  I don't really get around to this blog very often.  You make me want to spend more time here.

posted by TAPS. on November 30, 2008 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Great piece thoughtful smooth trans, slowly flowing I continue to read.

Thank you Mystereo for reading all my stuff.  I really appreciate all of your comments. 

posted by TAPS. on November 30, 2008 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS-Absolutely Beautifull! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 30, 2008 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Great piece thoughtful smooth trans, slowly flowing I continue to read.

posted by Mystereo on November 30, 2008 at 12:42 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and creative, TAPS!

 

posted by PoetRaye on November 29, 2008 at 10:26 PM | link to this | reply