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Love this sam. The cadence adds a sense of excitement with the repetitive runandhide run together. Neat style!
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merkie
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November 30, 2008
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Unique style..... I hear a drum beat and a longing for peace.
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yellowrose55
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November 30, 2008
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How Unique!
Great poem.
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Kolekshuns
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November 30, 2008
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RomaKay
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November 30, 2008
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Just playing with imagry again? You're worse than I am! Really like this one (and also EE). Loved the two subjects/characters--the corpse and the runaway noun (counter subject/image theme). It's like 2 subjects in syntax seeking an object as if to make a sentence and then finding themselves in a 3rd dimension (oh, there is a diff between painting and sculpture?)and after their calls, finding that response in managed space--and surprise! They are now part of it.
And you're just playing with imagry?...humnn!! This poem is a dramatic thought while traveling thru time and space while using their attributes, and not being confused about it.
Now, do you want to know what I really think?
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jfm32
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November 30, 2008
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Highly creative and profound !!
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afzal50
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November 30, 2008
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Fantastic work, Sam! Wow...
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PoetRaye
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November 30, 2008
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irunandhide
i like it!!
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duracell
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November 30, 2008
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Great imagery! Very atmospheric . . .
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Soaker
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November 29, 2008
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Very enjoyable piece well crafted so I run and hide.
When it's time for me to walk Jesus when ever he decides to drop by my soul will step out my human home. "The Human Shell" I havn't post yet.
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Mystereo
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November 29, 2008
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runandhide
Runanhide has a definite repeated rythym to it. It is amazing with what it conveys. I do wonder if you were seeing a corpse for real. It might make anyone want to run and hide from what it would convey. It unfortunately lies in stark reality to each of us in the human condition. Very good poem with lots of feeling. I felt breathless as I ran and hid with you. MichaudBlaine123 Happy belated Thanksgiving.
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michaudblaine
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November 29, 2008
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this one is different
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lustorlove
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November 29, 2008
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beautiful!
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9STAR
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November 29, 2008
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runanhide...
Sometimes I also runandhide not out of fear or discovery but out of some childlike joy I didnt quite understand. To put it in this rare, lovely poetry, Sam, is genius - a most difficult imaging only a gifted soul can do. Its a beauty Sammy
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Rotsen
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November 29, 2008
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Looks like you are having fun :-) while you write beautiful poetry... very nice Sammy... loved it :-)
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Sinome
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November 29, 2008
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and having fun in a very clever way.
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Kabu
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November 29, 2008
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Pray ardently, Act bravely! - Ash
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ash_pradhan
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November 29, 2008
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Sam444
Loved the poetry and the word arrangement and I know how to runandhide too luv.
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WileyJohn
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November 29, 2008
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When we let fear find us,
unless we are firmly connected to the Light, our "i" will bottle our spirit soul and we try to runandhide from something that we have already let in.
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skye08
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November 29, 2008
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You have nothing to fear. You are moving to a zone of safety. God is with you.
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hardilaziz
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November 29, 2008
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