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I love it. I was so immersed in it.
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yellowrose55
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December 1, 2008
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This is
so creative! I love it!
posted by
RASSE
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November 30, 2008
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Deep and insightful versing, Sam...
Those two letters can be so
ambiguous! 
posted by
PoetRaye
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November 30, 2008
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I continue to read striking jewels for change in humans connect.
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Mystereo
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November 29, 2008
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I am no one to advise but I do feel that you should be proud of what you are now and where you are headed. You are on the right path. What you've left behind is worth discarding. What lies in store is worth treasuring! You're one of the brightest and the best souls on Blogit. I mean it.
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hardilaziz
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November 29, 2008
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Sam
Sometimes we just have to say the word “no” a little louder – perhaps not out loud, of course, but just to ourselves. But then we tend not to listen to ourselves…. You’re poem reinforces how we must utter the word in order live our best.
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Troosha
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November 29, 2008
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Shelly
This is superbly done! And for me, it has a terribly familiar ring to it! You will understand why, if I tell you that my screen saver consists of six words that continuously and slowly float across the otherwise empty screen, 'What are you waiting for?'...
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Nautikos
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November 29, 2008
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I love this Sam!
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Bel_
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November 29, 2008
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wow, chilling!
posted by
RomaKay
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November 29, 2008
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Powerful expression ...
posted by
afzal50
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November 29, 2008
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The ending note,
[I tell myself o’er and o’er again]
Somehow ‘no’ should have been enough
Somehow... ‘no’ ... should... which is an almost chocking of words overcome with the remorse of not having said
no, has been done marvelously. You have such fine mastery, amazing!!! Very powerful!! I am proud of my loving sis!!!
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Bhaskar.ing
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November 29, 2008
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The power of "no" is directly proportional to the softness of heart :)....
hope u all had a nice Thanksgiving! - Ash
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ash_pradhan
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November 28, 2008
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Superb Sam... if we only listened to our "no's and if our "no"s would be heard and heeded... Life would be simpler and nicer...wouldn't it. Excellent write. I hope you had a great Thanks Giving. My
2U and 1000000 xo :-)
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Sinome
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November 28, 2008
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No is never understood
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skye08
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November 28, 2008
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"No" is never enough, it seems....
....no matter how much I say it to myself.
I like the message in this, sam.
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metalrat
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November 28, 2008
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