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Great poem Sam... and great message.  no wonder you got a headache sweetie...with all those drums  drumming loll... just kidding ... its the Thanksgiving after- party wine talking :-) Truly an excellent poem

posted by Sinome on November 28, 2008 at 3:14 PM | link to this | reply

Very expressive

posted by pernesegirl1 on November 28, 2008 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

nice forceful poem

posted by lustorlove on November 28, 2008 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

great
great illustration of your faith. loved the repetition

posted by Luz_Briar on November 28, 2008 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

Peace and Compassion and an end to discrimination!! Very well written Sam.
Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 28, 2008 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Troosha on November 28, 2008 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply

Terrific Poem!
 Drums are terrific instruments.  They make the music. Love them,

                                     Drums


posted by Kolekshuns on November 28, 2008 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

very evokative
the pace of the poem echoes the beating of the drum - bravo!

posted by lionreign on November 28, 2008 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

keep the drums beating, pounding, pealing... almost staccato type. Marvellous.

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posted by afzal50 on November 28, 2008 at 3:18 AM | link to this | reply

How wonderful it will be when
we all are vibrating with the same vibrations of Love and Compassion.

posted by skye08 on November 28, 2008 at 3:14 AM | link to this | reply

Great
'end the discrimination'!would be a beautiful world.this had a great beat.thank you for the read and your words.

posted by rubypoem on November 28, 2008 at 1:50 AM | link to this | reply

The beat goes on

posted by Kabu on November 27, 2008 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

Happy Thanksgiving
Love ANROHA25

posted by ANROHA25 on November 27, 2008 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Sam444,
Beautiful. And it is my hope that your Drums will out distance the drum of inhumanity. Thanks and I hope this day finds you with Great Thanksgiving. 

posted by Glennb on November 27, 2008 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

  damn that was fire! opps oh ya! very well done Ha Ha Ha you still a super

posted by lestate7 on November 27, 2008 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

The drum is sounding and we march to the one we hear . Rhythm and flowi very expersessive Shelly Thanks for the comment on my poem.

posted by merkie on November 27, 2008 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful cadence, sam.
Matching the theme of drums.
And the message is timely and important.
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.

posted by metalrat on November 27, 2008 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

My dear Shelly
I am so glad to have caught you; just to say I am very pleased you are having a wonderful time and to thank you for making the time to stop by; enjoy my friend; many blessings and thanks again

posted by mariaki on November 27, 2008 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

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