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Heavy heart moving forward grisping the image of life in a death prayer!
posted by
Mystereo
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December 6, 2008
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Filled with love with a dastardly ending thought.
you go along wounding as tho you want some guy in your life to be meaningful. Somehow by the time you work wtih your feelings, you seem to want him dead. We can not own anyone mutually. We can only own our thoughts about someone. Be sure you don't expect in return that which you put out or you will be disappointed. Interesting twist at the end. Very cold.
posted by
michaudblaine
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November 29, 2008
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Interesting twist last 2 lines. Not sure how to take it but I like the ambiguity, and the entrance into a second dimension: for which way has your lover died?...natural causes (like death) or the end of a relationship (which I perceive, for myself, to be almost the same thing). Really like the spineroo on this one.
posted by
jfm32
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November 27, 2008
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