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Human connect droping seeds and planting for human change and growth.

posted by Mystereo on November 30, 2008 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: RomaKay
Thanks for stopping in, hope you enjoyed the visit!

posted by calia14 on November 30, 2008 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: pernese girl
Thanks so much!

posted by calia14 on November 30, 2008 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on November 30, 2008 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

I've been reading through your poetry. What a beautiful, expressive writer you are. Loved it all. Thanks.

posted by pernesegirl1 on November 27, 2008 at 11:57 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting review of the endochine system of A personality, and blood pressure boiling. Looking foward to your medical journal.

posted by jfm32 on November 27, 2008 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: You describe it perfectly and yes, it can lead to a snap!!
Thanks for your feedback, Ariala! 

posted by calia14 on November 27, 2008 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

You describe it perfectly and yes, it can lead to a snap!!

posted by Ariala on November 27, 2008 at 6:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Your deffinition
Oh, I know, mindopensup.  You feel so alive, but not quite in control.  Your regular self is there, but maybe in the passengers seat instead of the drivers for a change. 

posted by calia14 on November 27, 2008 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: One of the greatest poems evert!
Wow, thanks a lot Koleshuns!  I love the flowers, they smell wonderful :)

posted by calia14 on November 27, 2008 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply

Your deffinition

My teeth clenched whilst reading your poem.

The speed I read at increased towards the end (build up).

This feeling is something I do admit I like,  But also I hope not to reach

because it is scary, Do you know what I mean?

posted by mindopensup on November 26, 2008 at 10:34 PM | link to this | reply

One of the greatest poems evert!
 Love it!

     Bouquet


posted by Kolekshuns on November 26, 2008 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

Mariss
Thanks for stopping in Mariss!

posted by calia14 on November 26, 2008 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

A wonderful and accurate description of rage--and delivered in a poison bottle!!!

posted by mariss9 on November 26, 2008 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: ladychardonnay
Thanks for stopping in lady!  I appreciate the feedback.

posted by calia14 on November 26, 2008 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

i have spent many a night feeling that poison - well written

posted by ladychardonnay on November 26, 2008 at 6:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Strong and well done!
I appreciate the kind words katray

posted by calia14 on November 26, 2008 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: merkie
Thanks for the comment Merkie!

posted by calia14 on November 26, 2008 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well written ...
I like your way of looking at things genio

posted by calia14 on November 26, 2008 at 5:06 PM | link to this | reply

Strong and well done!
 

posted by Katray2 on November 26, 2008 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

Well done Calia, very good descripton that stirs the emotions.

posted by merkie on November 26, 2008 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply

Well written ...

... rage is a fabulous "tool" we have to start creativity ... a good friend with passion ... makes life feel stronger -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on November 26, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply